Sorry, but that old cliche, she/he really loved her/his mate. This was only sex with the lover. It is so incomplete as to be ludicrous.
Sex is only part of a persons life and a couples relationship. But it's too important to be taken so lightly. If it wasn't, there would be no grinding guilt when the gift is given to another.
I know now this was meant to be only stroke story, but I had hopes for it being something else.
and so is the premise line of this story, I'm sorry, the woman Maggie is protrayed as is a selfish bitch and her husband is a moron. This isn't love in any sense of the word, just mindless self pleasure. Good fantasy is rooted in reality, this ending could have used some reality.
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Anonymous01/06/06
you can't paint the true
marriage vows say one hubby and no others.she was a whore and the hubby was a moron.she was another man whoreslut.and the baby isn't the hubby.
I enjoyed her slide from grace and her self doubt; trying to blame her husband for what she was doing. As for her reputation; why is it seen as fine when a married fucks away from home but when a woman does it you all say she's a whore. Her fucking another man doesn't mean the husband's a moron either because not all men find out about a wife's indiscretions
She has been fucking Randall all along and then 7 weeks later she finds herself pregnant? Doesn't it usually take about 3 months before a woman discovers she might be pregnant? So whose baby is it?
English
tooo short
The parts are way too short, you need to make them much longer.
She LOVED her husband?
Sorry, but that old cliche, she/he really loved her/his mate. This was only sex with the lover. It is so incomplete as to be ludicrous.
Sex is only part of a persons life and a couples relationship. But it's too important to be taken so lightly. If it wasn't, there would be no grinding guilt when the gift is given to another.
I know now this was meant to be only stroke story, but I had hopes for it being something else.
the Troubador
Reality is tough
and so is the premise line of this story, I'm sorry, the woman Maggie is protrayed as is a selfish bitch and her husband is a moron. This isn't love in any sense of the word, just mindless self pleasure. Good fantasy is rooted in reality, this ending could have used some reality.
you can't paint the true
marriage vows say one hubby and no others.she was a whore and the hubby was a moron.she was another man whoreslut.and the baby isn't the hubby.
Enjoyed it
I enjoyed her slide from grace and her self doubt; trying to blame her husband for what she was doing. As for her reputation; why is it seen as fine when a married fucks away from home but when a woman does it you all say she's a whore. Her fucking another man doesn't mean the husband's a moron either because not all men find out about a wife's indiscretions
Whose baby was it?
She has been fucking Randall all along and then 7 weeks later she finds herself pregnant? Doesn't it usually take about 3 months before a woman discovers she might be pregnant? So whose baby is it?
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