this story was believable and was a good story, i really enjoyed it. hope to have other good stories from this author. It is one of the few 5s i ever give.
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Anonymous02/26/04
Love It
Wow , what a turn on. Sure kept me hot while reading it and thinking of the story. This one needs extending for more adventures. I'm sure it's in the back of your mind. I for one would be glad to read about what they did later that evening. ENJOYED.
What a great story! I love sex outdoors and especially on a boat. Please write about what happens later that night.
Is there any chance that the foresome can get involved with the group from work? The possibilities are almost endless. I'm getting hot just thinking about it.
totally believable and well written...hope there will be more of this foursome's adventures.
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Anonymous02/27/04
Boaters Always Get Wet!
This is a very believeable story! The two male characters are the right mix of wierdo and life long friends. It is great to hear about this kind of sex between consenting adults that wont leave anyone with permanent scars.
Great story! Write about the night time escapades of this hot foursome!!! Go Boy Go!.
English
a nice believable story
this story was believable and was a good story, i really enjoyed it. hope to have other good stories from this author. It is one of the few 5s i ever give.
Love It
Wow , what a turn on. Sure kept me hot while reading it and thinking of the story. This one needs extending for more adventures. I'm sure it's in the back of your mind. I for one would be glad to read about what they did later that evening. ENJOYED.
WOW !!!!
Keep the story going
Great Story
What a great story! I love sex outdoors and especially on a boat. Please write about what happens later that night.
Is there any chance that the foresome can get involved with the group from work? The possibilities are almost endless. I'm getting hot just thinking about it.
I Likd it!!!!!!!!!!
Good story mate
more please
totally believable and well written...hope there will be more of this foursome's adventures.
Boaters Always Get Wet!
This is a very believeable story! The two male characters are the right mix of wierdo and life long friends. It is great to hear about this kind of sex between consenting adults that wont leave anyone with permanent scars.
Great story! Write about the night time escapades of this hot foursome!!! Go Boy Go!.
Sensual
Very HOT and Sensual !!! Very well written.
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