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good story. I also like the fact that it the next chapters comes quiet quickly
Fun
I was a bit worried something had scared you off when there was a bit longer wait for this chapter. Welcome back. Like the setup of Darcy and Stuart, Darcy needed a better bf.
more please
Ok so I am a selective reader and it takes a pretty good writer to get my attention. Names like Terry goodkind, Melanie rawn, and Margaret wise and tracy Hickman are the authors that always caught my attention. With that said you have really captivated my attention and if you haven't already published a book I would seriously recommend you look into it.
All in all please keep writing me chapters. Yes I enjoy the sex scenes and I would love to see if he delves into the role plays a little. But I truly love the building of the charecters and am genuinely interested to see who he meets in his new job, see how melody and the church girl develop their relationship, see what her thoughts on religion are, know what the locket means, and so much more.
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