I hate to criticise anyone who has taken the time to write a story but I have to just say that it was all a bit clichéd!
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Anonymous02/27/16
real good another chapter
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Anonymous02/27/16
what a promising new author!
This writer is a young guy, early 20s, and I'm guessing a Brit (the whilst instead of while). He has a marvelously dirty mind, and gives his fetish as incest/taboo, good news indeed in my book. In this excellent short story, the family fucking is the very best kind--motherfucking. Sean is 18, so he gets hard from every passing breeze, let alone from hearing his mom strumming her pussy. What got me thinking was his mom. "Linda lay back on her bed, imagining what her son's cock must look like." Lots and lots of mothers, maybe every last one of them, must wonder about what their darling baby boy's got jumping around in his pants. You'd think they'd just ask the kid to haul it out for mommy's viewing pleasure. Anyway, Linda wants much more than that, and the result is that Sean does what plenty of boys'd give anything to do--he fucks his own mother. They discover that a son's penis is the perfect filler for his mother's vagina, and they have themselves a hot incestuous fuck. I have the feeling it won't be the last time.
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Anonymous02/27/16
Great story!
Sean seems a fine young man to take care of his mother (in more ways than one!) -- make him even more of a man by gracing that masculine chest with a bit of chest hair for mom to taste and touch!
i read it and it was like okay, on my part i felt like you rushed to end the story right away i felt that somehow you are holding back something while writing this story, it was a bit short, it was kind of sweet but i just felt it was lacking of some strong foundation, i liked it though, it would have been better if it was longer or 2 to 3 pages would have make this story a really good one but A for effort nice job
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I liked the story, but the sex was way too short.
It was ok but
I hate to criticise anyone who has taken the time to write a story but I have to just say that it was all a bit clichéd!
real good another chapter
what a promising new author!
This writer is a young guy, early 20s, and I'm guessing a Brit (the whilst instead of while). He has a marvelously dirty mind, and gives his fetish as incest/taboo, good news indeed in my book. In this excellent short story, the family fucking is the very best kind--motherfucking. Sean is 18, so he gets hard from every passing breeze, let alone from hearing his mom strumming her pussy. What got me thinking was his mom. "Linda lay back on her bed, imagining what her son's cock must look like." Lots and lots of mothers, maybe every last one of them, must wonder about what their darling baby boy's got jumping around in his pants. You'd think they'd just ask the kid to haul it out for mommy's viewing pleasure. Anyway, Linda wants much more than that, and the result is that Sean does what plenty of boys'd give anything to do--he fucks his own mother. They discover that a son's penis is the perfect filler for his mother's vagina, and they have themselves a hot incestuous fuck. I have the feeling it won't be the last time.
Great story!
Sean seems a fine young man to take care of his mother (in more ways than one!) -- make him even more of a man by gracing that masculine chest with a bit of chest hair for mom to taste and touch!
Short and sweet, but good all the same.
it was okay
i read it and it was like okay, on my part i felt like you rushed to end the story right away i felt that somehow you are holding back something while writing this story, it was a bit short, it was kind of sweet but i just felt it was lacking of some strong foundation, i liked it though, it would have been better if it was longer or 2 to 3 pages would have make this story a really good one but A for effort nice job
It was good but it could have been better if it had been longer with more verbal interaction between the mom and son.
good start
Very good start. Next chapter will be more interestin for sure.
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