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Argh...
I always start out really enjoying your stories, but the addition of more and more partners just kills it for me. I had hope that with a title of of "Triad" this group relationship wouldn't just keep growing. Not a detraction from your skill, just not my cup of tea.
Great story
Please keep it to the three of them and don't add more people into it. Up to you its your story. Look forward to the next chapter
Hmm
As in I'm not sure I love this story. I like it a lot, I really got into it at the beginning. I'm trying to be open-minded and hopefully, constructive. I started a couple of your other series, and when other relationships come into the group, I stopped reading. Perhaps it's just not my thing, but then again, I like harem stories. Not fair, huh? The good thing is that stories like this make me think. The main reason I'm not totally in love with this story is Anna. From her first intro, I didn't feel a connection, like Jim's relationship with her felt rather shallow, or even undeveloped, when compared to Abby. Perhaps it was meant to, since we don't know ultimately where you will go with the story. One reason I like some harem stories, is that while completely unrealistic, there is a great deal of openness and honesty. If my partner wants to leave me, or change the relationship, all I could ask for is honesty, I wouldn't be able to control how that person felt. Since Anna and her partner Sean were not open and honest, it just makes me dislike them. Kudos to Jean for asking the two to show Anna love. That's tough to do. And of course, a Hollywood starlet, probably loving a certain type of lifestyle should not expect exclusivity from herself or her partners. The way she jumped into their "marriage" was unconvincing, after wanting a certain distance earlier. So this development just feels off.
Still good
Love it. Life can be complicated. People err and cause pain. Jean is a wise women. Would I exchange my life with Jim? No. But story is good.
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