Murder Mystery Weekend Pt. 06

A well spun yarn!

This was a well thought out and well written piece of work and I could hardly stand it waiting for each new chapter. I hope that you keep writing and I look forward to reading it!

great story. just wished the epilogue was longer.

Great writer!

Fell in love with your storytelling on the bridge club. This story was another fantastic addition to your, hopefully, growing body of work. Thank you. Please keep writing.

Thank You Very Much

Another excellent story. Very well done.

Excellent!

Really enjoyed this story! I do wish the buildup to Colin & Teresa getting back together was a bit more drawn out. I related to the story quite well, as I have partaken in a couple of Murder Mystery nights, and could picture the cottage as well, though I admittedly was replacing some of the scenes with my own cottage. The epilogue was a bit brief, but I suppose it provided some closure as well. Overall, well done. 5 * from me.

Great story

Loved the murder mystery setting, really made proceedings more fun than usual for a story like this.

Excellent story

I look forward to your next, this was a wonderful roller coaster with twists on every turn except one. Thanks again

Truely wonderful!

You did a great job with this story. Loved it.

It's funny, I remember see the name of this story popping up and thinking that it sounded like an interesting read. However I kept passing it by not noticing Your name underneath. Had I connected the dots faster, I would have read this much sooner.

Easily better than The Bridge Club, and that was pretty damn good too!

alright

I liked the story overall, the creativity and the effort to pull off a whodunit in an erotica was commendable. One thing I'm not really on point was how the relationship between Colin and Teresa developed. I didn't feel the spark between them, only Colin's frequent comments on her Mona Lisa smile and his compliments on her intellect showed his attraction to her. I know Teresa was supposed to lurk in the shadows and let Colin sow his oats and have some sort of epiphany but she was not really projecting anything more than platonic and supportive emotions to him. It would have been better if she showed some sort of jealousy, some subtle acts of being hurt that he was sleeping with other women, but there was nothing. I think they would have been better as best friends and Colin pursued Lena and ended up with her.

Superior Effort

This was even better than your bridge weekend.

Great imagination required to develop a storyline like this one. Thank you for that!! Might have developed a few of the characters a bit more but that may also have lengthened the story excessively..

Thank you for sharing your excellent story telling.

Ed

Very good.

I love the nice touch of having Leo being unable to tell Ee how he feels.
Very realistic.

Jeepers

You are really a good writer. l am duly impressed. And looking forward eagerly to your next tale.

another awesome read!

very well crafted - thanks for this and I hope to see more from you soon