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Zodiac Girls Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/04/04

Very well written

I always look forward to your stories, and this one did not disappoint. I thought the power struggle was brilliant, but I couldn't help but laugh at the end thinking of Johnny voicing his queenly commands.

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by MaxiJ03/04/04

excellent

Wonderful smooth reading story. You kept me interested from beginning to end. Being an aries (04/04) I see those characteristics in me and you conveyed the feelings perfectly. Turned me on completely. Thank you. Cute ending though. Made me giggle! Jane

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by 03/04/04

Sexy Sexy

I loved it before and I love it now dr_m. Thank you so much for participating in this chain story and the idea behind it. You truly are wonderful. And a good writer to boot. Always, Elizabetht

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by Joseki Ko03/04/04

Wow

Very powerful story. Good scenes as well.

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by Man Ray03/07/04

Well done..

Well done on an imaginative, clever and very sexy story!

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by msboy803/07/04

Great Story!

Wow. You ARE very talented. I was enthralled by all of your story, you wove the tale well and drew me in. I cannot hold a candle to your story with my Leo submission. I only hope to learn to be a better writer.

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by damppanties03/07/04

Taut. Tense. Gripping.

doc, How do you do it? Is there a formula or do you invoke some spirits or something; or your Muse is linked to those Gods and Goddesses I suppose. Another one to add to your great bunch of stories. I had a tightening in my stomach all the time I was reading that. I was so captivated. And I guess I shouldn't tell you about the other places where the story affected me...

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by Corylea08/11/08

An Aries woman says hey

Hey, Doc. I was born on March 24th and have never believed in astrology, but if one gets to have THAT much fun, maybe I'll change my mind. :-)

Fun story, as always.

I see by your forum bio that you're an Aries, yourself. If you put an Aries man and an Aries woman together, do you get a power struggle or a conflagration? Or both? :-)

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by Anonymous10/10/10

wow

that was great

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