All Comments on 'His First Blowjob'

Her name changed from Lucy to Sophie?..... Good story otherwise

who the hell is sophie?

I love the way Lucy changed her name to Sophie at the end, lol

huh, go fig she does change her name

Maybe saying hell yeah partying is fun, but you gotta keep an eye on those girls lol. Either way, a very good, if short, story

OK story but continuity a bit off!

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where does sophie come from?

I have to say this was a very sweet story, xxxbob. If the subject matter were handled improperly this could have been dicey or offensive path. But you succeeded in not only making this about overcoming insecurity rather than a disability, but also making it heart felt, erotic and romantic. Keep writing.

Sorry, mate. That was meant for a different author listed in my history. Please take no offense to anything mentioned previously.

But... since I'm here I'd like to mention this story is enjoyable. Sensations are tangible and the heat of the moment described is effective and feels real.

Lucy turns into Sophie, Nice one.

The girl's name throughout the story is Lucy, but in the last paragraph you say Sophie?

A great little story. Would be nice to have a life situation where just a few lucky words to the right person resulted in a blowjob.

The name change thing is understandable. I imagine we you decided to change the name at some point and one slipped past the edit. BTDT. It happens.

Good story.

Why did her name change after the sucked dick?