I am voting a 5 on this story based on the promise of what chapter 2 might be.
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Anonymous03/02/04
a nonny mouse
An interesting story, well written and with a plot. Thank you!!!
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Anonymous03/04/04
Now you have my total attention!!
A nice relaxed style - a nice introduction to what might be a very erotic series of stories. I look forward to the next chapter in the not too distant future.
Five
I am voting a 5 on this story based on the promise of what chapter 2 might be.
a nonny mouse
An interesting story, well written and with a plot. Thank you!!!
Now you have my total attention!!
A nice relaxed style - a nice introduction to what might be a very erotic series of stories. I look forward to the next chapter in the not too distant future.
I missed your stories
just the best writer of erotica.
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