NIce, but the story might be more enjoyable if fleshed out with some dialog and perhaps some brazen, haughty dominance by the seductress mom. Or perhaps in a new story ...
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NIce, but the story might be more enjoyable if fleshed out with some dialog and perhaps some brazen, haughty dominance by the seductress mom. Or perhaps in a new story ...
attention
Some think grammar is unimportant. In written media, it's always important.
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