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The Alpha's Prey

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by Anonymous

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by PrettyKittyKaty03/03/16

omigod!

I love love love this!! Yummyyyy!

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by TheDragonsMaiden03/03/16

Stand Alone or Series ?

Thanks! To be honest, it was meant to be the first chapter in a series, but I'm thinking of leaving it as a stand alone. I haven't quite decided yet. I will wait and see what some of the readers think!

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by Anonymous03/03/16

Error

Should be "in vain," not "in vein."

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by Anonymous03/03/16

More

Personally I would love to see another chapter . Maybe a before . How she ended up there and definitely an after . It's good as a standalone too . Either way it was amazingly cute . So damn cute lol

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by Anonymous03/04/16

ohhhh..

I read your previous "alpha's prey" and was confused because it didn't seem to be a apt title for the storyline. Then I saw that what was once "the alpha's prey" was retitled "possession" NOW with the addition of THIS story,it makes sense!!! lol loved them both-5 stars!!

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by Anonymous03/04/16

Attn: TheDragonsMaiden

Series, Most Definitely a Series.

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by BadCittyLady03/04/16

Series Defentantly

Wow. What a way to grab you! Now you have somuch more to tell! Chapters & chapters! I can't wait to see what will happen...
Please post a new chapter to the story soon!

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by Anonymous03/04/16

Awesome

Wow. So I saw the story To Mate and Omega and then had to look at what else you've written ! I'm impressed, I love your stuff. I can't wait to read more ! I will definitely be following you !

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by TheDragonsMaiden03/04/16

Sorry for the confusion!

Yes, sorry! When I submitted "Possessions" I accidentally mislabeled it. I apologize! They are all properly titled now!

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by fictionsBFF03/31/16

Keep going!

Can't wait to read more. hope you write more next time.

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by Anonymous04/02/16

Aw

I wish you continued this series. This was one of my favorite to read and I always looked forward to the next chapter. Please think about continuing this absolutely wonderful series. It would be a blessing if you did.

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by Absinth304/22/16

Stand-alone

Her actions (actually the lack thereof) indicate the beginnings of acceptance. He's handsome and caring, and he proclaimed her his mate. Wolves aren't players, they mate for life. So let's say it all together:

They all lived happily ever after 💫

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by TheDragonsMaiden05/24/16

Hello Loves!

Just so everyone knows, my Facebook page is up!

There I have sneak peeks of Chapters not yet published, family trees, and maps. :) I am also quicker to respond to questions and messages there!

Please, hop on over and give me a Like!

https://www.facebook.com/TheDragonsMaiden/

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by Anonymous05/25/16

mehh

Yes its on lit but seriously a backstory would have made this interesting. Wont lie didn't read the last half of this just sighed and thought this again..

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by Anonymous05/27/16

Like it but it seems like there's more to the story*hint, hint* than what you wrote.

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by Anonymous06/18/16

What happened to your other story?

I really like this stand alone, but like many others really crave for it to be made into something more.

Also what happened to your other piece, To Mate an Omega, it was posted for a time and then disappeared. I think that story has a lot of potential and would love to see it completed. Anyways keep up the good work and never stop writing.

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