All Comments on 'Malcubus Ch. 11: Bad Romance'

Eric has shaped Rosmerta, and now the succubus is in *love* with him? Belongs to him?

Starting to itch wondering what is going on with the plot, especially after the 10.5 teaser you wrote.

I think this was the best one yet

Yeah, yeah: Fuck, suck, cum, feels amazing, orgasm. Got it. Too repetitive and (hard to believe I'd say this) too much sex in relationship to story. Could we PLEASE move the plot along?

Absolutely loving the direction and the balance between sex and plot. Most of all surprised by how well you worked the tension in with the 10.5 chapter. Seriously don't change a thing. This is the best series I've read on this site.

Eric cums an unnaturally huge amount, but there is not a speck anywhere on Rosie and she can barely taste any in her.

Cassie feels honey and later ambrosia in her belly. Then her pussy has unusually an sticky fluid after she cums.

I suspect these are not unrelated coincidences.

this story seriously only gets better with every chapter. Amazing human-succubus bond, insane impossible sexual proportions, evil demonic enemies. Its like hentai but with fleshed out and meaningful characters. I'm so excited to see more. And even more excited to see Rosie get her ass torn open with Eric's new dick.

This story is so very very good! I love the themes, I love the idea that he gets more and more dominant, I love the way she talks and what they do. You could drag the sex scenes out more for my taste, going more into detail how they/their organs feel. But that is kind of my fetish.

If anyone happens to know similar stories, please make recommendations!

Woo!

One of, if not the best series in this website. Love the direction story is taking.

MOAR PLEASE

Just wanna let ya know, still eagerly awaiting your next lovely installment!

Have gotten hooked so now I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I am officially hooked on this story, Eric's shift will be interesting if he has to deal with an even greater libido and the reactions to his new pheromones.

Also I'm intrigued to learn what role Eric's mother will have in the story and why she left.

damn good writing here, I'm completely addicted. But hurry the fuck up with writing, there's still so much to tell! It's nice to see their relationsship progress, but I hope it won't be stuck there and that he can actually form her character (just as she is forming his character) so that she can have feelings like love one day and also admit them to him.

Also, there are still so many loose ends to tie up! I mean, what happened to the bookstore-girl and the club-girl? And what will be the purpose of the girl Rosie changed in the club? And I wanna see his sister fuck him, dammit! And so, so much more...

So I can only repeat myself: Hurry the fuck up, damnit!

I wonder if Rosie is able to shape other people than Eric. Also, I feel that Moira's dreams have as much chance of being a stunt from Rosie to get her back with Eric unless it there's a more sinister reason.

Anyway, between the story, characters and the sex, you just got yourself a fan.

Hi. Still faithfully waiting, but hurry!!!! if you can. ;--)

This story is amazing! Hoping you are inspired soon to continue!

Sad that you have dropped the ball and left us hanging so long. Ohh well lahdyda.

Please write another chapter

I hope that you continue this story soon, it would also be fun to see Cassie's friends falling in Eric's lap one after the other before her, frustrating her even more.

I really enjoyed reading this story thus far and I hope you'll continue to update in the months to come, I'm really curious to see where it will go, both for the sex and the characters;

Hey, i think it would be appreciated by all of us if you at least told us what happened to you. It's almost been a year since you've published the next chapter of this story and I would hate for you to abandon it

I'd murder if it made the next chapter appear here tomorrow.

Waiting patiently for over a year. What happened to you?

We want more!!

One tends to suspect this is an abandoned story since Elecebra hasn't posted anything since 06/26/16.

Please come back and write another chapter or at least give us some update as to whether or not you're going to be continuing this story

...like the previous fans that posted before me, we want more. When will you be back?

this is like the 8th story that is amazing but unfinished

How are you gonna say its 12 parts and stop one chap short. Especialy when so much is unresolved. At the very least we need an excuse as to whats going on. Especially if your going to dabble into the lore and background and a succubus falls in love with a human.

Why the tantalizing fork with Chap 10.5? And the allusions to how he stumbled on the spell if you’re going to terminate this story? It’s one of th better sucubus stories out there, so I hope your juices get going again

Please continue this work! It is one of the only stories I have read where demon acts like a demon. It's intriguing.

Please please please please... it’s quarantine, and your story stands between me and sanity. Everyone loves this story (me and the five people I shared it with) so please if you could find it within yourself to continue... please. Until then, I’ll always be begging for more Rosmerta.

Please keep writing, its a very good story and i look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Tremendous story but many open paths. My thoughts

1) Ch 10.5 - with evil group, less interested in this path as it can take You down world impacting, less enjoyable storylines.

2) Cassie - less interested in the lesbian line, though a threesome with her bro would be very cool. I imagine his physical changes would shock her and her friends. Interesting to follow some of these paths.

3) Other threesomes - they could have with either the stripper or Caitlyn.

4) Roommates - would b fun to see what happens to him with Tess, with Ana and possibly both.

5) more clubbing - perhaps more clubbing for pickups or just some fun experiences would be cool to do

In general, I would think his improvements would drive him to a better life situation as well via a job, school, and other activities outside his home

Any chance of any more please?

Disappointed to see you haven't written any more of this phenomenal story since 2016 please start up again.