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The reason behind the 1.71 rating
The surprisingly low rating was what caught my attention during my daily session of Literotica reading. And after reading this, while the rating is harsher than warranted, it is justified in some aspects.
First, there is no context whatsoever, and therefore leads to a lack of understanding of the story (if it could be called one). I love challenges in reading, and frankly I believe that it is what Literotica is missing the most. But this story provides no insights to the true theme, thus rather than being challenging it is confusing.
Second, there is a lack of consistency. There are too many instances of jumping around: from near-death experience to therapist, from rape victim to dominatrix of human minds. It is difficult if not impossible to grasp the true intended meaning of the female, because there is no plot other than a disorganized stream of consciousness, which may or may not be a reliable source of information.
Third, cynical positions, especially those that are as blatant as the ones in this work, generally don't sit well with Literotica readers. I cannot say that I am a fan of it myself either.
To the author, I don't necessarily hope that you change the story on these points; rather, I believe that these points are what made the story what it is. I do want you to rethink your stylistic choices in your future writing: stories whose abstraction passes a threshold may not be stories at all anymore.
Thank you very much for the thoughtful comment.
I really appreciated reading your comment and the time that you took writing it.
A lot of what I write are experiments. Sometimes, they pay off. Sometimes, they are stepping stones to something else.
Because they are experiments, hearing how the landed is very valuable to me.
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