They never married but stayed together as best friends with benefits...I believe that after some time it was much more than friendship, that they loved each other...But they thought that the life both want to embrace, it was better to stay single...The problem with this story, even if true, is that she was a tease, sure, but wasn't open to any one approach (the first night in the bar showed it)...Then without any talking between them, and without any previous sign, she was open to everything...The question: didn't this first episode sealed his decision to not marry? And maybe that decision was the right one, because they stayed together till the end of their lives (she is 3 years old than him), because it took out the burden of marriage from them...2*
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Anonymous03/04/16
Not very well writtten
Thanks for the effort though
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Anonymous03/04/16
Not erotic or suspenseful nor dramatic. What was the point?
Here, fuck my girl friend. Thanks.
WTF?
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Anonymous03/04/16
Horribly written
If the rest are as full of mistakes and as badly written as this one, don't bother posting them. I'm being generous with a two.
Well you sure as hell have no idea of erotic or lov. Your wife lft your sorry ass becasue of your attitude
dear annony!! And to really piss you off I'm not bonnie/vast, or whatever you call me wrong again asshole of LIT! gave this a 5 to offset your fag 1 vote. It has nothing to do with the story I just want to offset your 1 vote dumbass
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Anonymous03/04/16
Really?
No background on either of them? Did they just arrive from Mars with no earlier relationships that affect their lives? Also, with the only description of some bar scenes, how is this erotic--really it should be in "non-erotic."
If you can't even bother to post the lousy story in the right place, it can't be good and it wasn't - so many irritating mistakes. Next thing you need is some clever story line with dialogue not written by a teenager. This was awful.
1 star.
I dont know if you talk and think like the character in this story
but if so, you are like the pathetic cucks on blogs that crave sharing their women over all rationality.
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Anonymous03/04/16
What?
No flow here or explanation how she went from a tease to a slut, nor why he likes her that way.
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Anonymous03/04/16
sorry with HIV like it is this is an impossible situation all the way around
1* and coming in sitting down with a woman who had a partner, staying that long, wonder how many times a year he is 21?
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Anonymous03/05/16
not a bad story for a retarded guy.
If you had a I.Q. over 80 you would realize how stupid this was.
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Anonymous03/05/16
The good thing about hiv
Is that it gets rid of people like this author.unfortunately,they breed faster than it takes them out
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Anonymous03/05/16
Is that lessie bonny mouthing off again?
the fur muncher must have nothing better to do today but troll the pages of loving wives looking to call people names. What a looser. 1* for a slimy sewer story.
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Anonymous03/05/16
Loving Wives?
Where is the wife? A tease girl friend that turned into a slut without any reason. WTF
1*
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Anonymous03/06/16
wrong category
1*
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Anonymous06/11/16
Another great story.
I really wonder why some people read this kind of story if they are going to bitch so much. I liked it.
English
They never married...
They never married but stayed together as best friends with benefits...I believe that after some time it was much more than friendship, that they loved each other...But they thought that the life both want to embrace, it was better to stay single...The problem with this story, even if true, is that she was a tease, sure, but wasn't open to any one approach (the first night in the bar showed it)...Then without any talking between them, and without any previous sign, she was open to everything...The question: didn't this first episode sealed his decision to not marry? And maybe that decision was the right one, because they stayed together till the end of their lives (she is 3 years old than him), because it took out the burden of marriage from them...2*
Not very well writtten
Thanks for the effort though
Not erotic or suspenseful nor dramatic. What was the point?
Here, fuck my girl friend. Thanks.
WTF?
Horribly written
If the rest are as full of mistakes and as badly written as this one, don't bother posting them. I'm being generous with a two.
1*
Where the hell is the wife in this fucking bad story?
5 for effort and content
Good LW story
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
Well you sure as hell have no idea of erotic or lov. Your wife lft your sorry ass becasue of your attitude
dear annony!! And to really piss you off I'm not bonnie/vast, or whatever you call me wrong again asshole of LIT! gave this a 5 to offset your fag 1 vote. It has nothing to do with the story I just want to offset your 1 vote dumbass
Really?
No background on either of them? Did they just arrive from Mars with no earlier relationships that affect their lives? Also, with the only description of some bar scenes, how is this erotic--really it should be in "non-erotic."
1*
in honor of bonny/vasty the whore of Literotica
5 to offsert the asshole of LIT's 1 vote
back at you asshole of lIT!
So you realize this is the LOVING WIVES category?
If you can't even bother to post the lousy story in the right place, it can't be good and it wasn't - so many irritating mistakes. Next thing you need is some clever story line with dialogue not written by a teenager. This was awful.
1 star.
I loved it!
Judy sounds like my kind of girl!
Why are you insulted when your manhood is questioned?
It's obvious from the story that you are gay (not that there's anything wrong with that).
PS -- ending the story with that "true" nonsense is the icing on the cake. Your idiotic story isn't true.
Annony knows all about gay
he is one. gave this a 5
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
Short and Boring**
Thanks for the effort,
I dont know if you talk and think like the character in this story
but if so, you are like the pathetic cucks on blogs that crave sharing their women over all rationality.
What?
No flow here or explanation how she went from a tease to a slut, nor why he likes her that way.
sorry with HIV like it is this is an impossible situation all the way around
1* and coming in sitting down with a woman who had a partner, staying that long, wonder how many times a year he is 21?
not a bad story for a retarded guy.
If you had a I.Q. over 80 you would realize how stupid this was.
The good thing about hiv
Is that it gets rid of people like this author.unfortunately,they breed faster than it takes them out
Is that lessie bonny mouthing off again?
the fur muncher must have nothing better to do today but troll the pages of loving wives looking to call people names. What a looser. 1* for a slimy sewer story.
Loving Wives?
Where is the wife? A tease girl friend that turned into a slut without any reason. WTF
1*
wrong category
1*
Another great story.
I really wonder why some people read this kind of story if they are going to bitch so much. I liked it.
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