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Age restriction?
Look at paragraph 5. Age 14?
Author here
The characters are intended to be portrayed as eighteen years of age. I don't think I stated that explicitly. That said, the sentence referring to the characters having sex in the past when underage, without going into detail, IS permissible at Literotica. Thanks for the interest.
Second chapter should be up soon.
started at age fourteen
We had sex the first time the day after my fourteenth birthday.
I'd been having sex with Katey for three months.
Simple math: 14y + 3m + 6m
Story takes place at age 14.25 and six months later at age 14.75
Author again
Just checked. You're right. I'd intended 3 months to be 3 years+. So, 17 years and change plus 6 months for 18. It's made more clear in subsequent chapters which I'm still working on. Sorry for the mix-up. I'll have to edit that.
Thanks for the feedback.
Katey is barely 5' tall and no breasts?
Sounds more like an 11 yr old than an 18 yr old.
Sorry but I prefer my women to not be little girls.
Finally!
How refreshing to read something a tad realistic on this tight-assed site. Sure the whole Master PC thing is a silly conceit, but in the real world a lot of young people have sex long before the arbitrary age of 18. I'm not advocating it, but take off the blinkers. Healthy and horney 16 year olds are not swayed by arbitrary limits. I'm not condoning child abuse of any sort, but the real world pays no attention to arbitrary limits of any kind. Take a look at the success of your war on drugs. You can't legislate morality! Is that so hard to remember?
Nicely written, good addition to MasterPC universe
Ignore the troll. You've got a good story going. Hoping to read more. Glad the protagonist has some angst and that its thru his ignorance that complications and situations arise. I hate the cocky omniscient and omnipotent characters that you find so often in the MC genre
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Boring, No build up, just very amateur writing....
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