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by LeBroz11/07/07

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Bit of a hard edge here with a twist at the end.

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by LeBroz11/11/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.



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by twelveoone03/23/11

Oh

Je-zus,
cut the bullshit
poetic dancing around

you really know how to do this 5,10,15 if I could give it

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