Naked Wedding, Mom's Relief

Enjoyed the masterful escalation , exotic setting and plausible deniability of mutual mom - son desire

There's nothing new here in terms of core action / main entreė, but it's the imaginative preparation and presentation of appetizers that make old seem original. Mom and son had nice rapport which kick starts each individual pushing of carnal envelope. Full marks. *****

Their trip isn't over yet.

This is a wonderful stand-alone story, but you could easily continue it to reveal what else cums up before they go home. Lots of possibilities.

Where did THAT cum from?

I imagine that Riding a Cock is like Riding a Bicycle ... once you learn how, you never forget. So, if Jane is a prim & proper hausfrau now then when/where did she acquire her skills? It sounds like Sonny Boy (I don't recall seeing his name anywhere) is pondering the same thing.
This spa vacation looks like a great opportunity for the two to let it all hang out and do a little more exploring. You didn't say whether or not Sonny Boy was a virgin, but I think it might be great for Aunt Helen to do a little bonding with her nephew. I mean, is it cheating as long as you keep it in the family?

great story

more chapters please

This has potential

It was a quick an sexy story but it left me wanting for more. Potential is there so please do continue with the sexcapades!

5*

Not this author's best, sadly.

I could only give this story a three, because the author stopped so far short of a truly satisfactory ending - and is in the habit of never giving his readers a second chapter, no matter how much they ask for one.

Awesome

Please add some more chapters, this time the Mother and Sister get together with the son coming added too.

Time to do a sequel

I know you haven't done a 2nd chapter for any of your stories. You need to for this one. Sisters, mother & son, aunt & nephew, group sex. All can be chapters.

Well written and hot!

Great story. Love the humour a Nd the topic. I really hope you do a chapter 3

Hot

I really liked this just as it was.

TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS

I like the prim mommy gives in stories so this was great for that, but enjoy plausible twists and turns which this lacked. A sequel could be fun.

Nice!

I hope there is a part 2.

Great story!

I love how all the sex between mom and son is done for perfectly sensible reasons. What a good mom! Would have enjoyed seeing cum rolling down her thighs as she stood up for her sister in the nude wedding.

Hotter than HOT!

Earth-scorchingly hot was this tale of two lovers. More! More!

Hot,hot,hot

What a hot story there needs to be more to this than 1 chapter, you have all the right ingredients to continue this story. The second chapter is going to be hot please continue this story..

Well then...

I hope that there's more planned after this because seriously, I NEED more!

Great story

It works just fine as a stand-alone but a Chapter 2 would also be welcome.

another great story, as is HA's habit

I love the image at the end, as the wedding guests are all standing naked, "I noticed cum leaking down mom's thighs, from deep inside her pussy. It was my cum from before, buried deep inside her cunt." That has to be the best sight a son will ever see--his own creamy semen trickling down his own mother's thighs from the warm wet mommy-cunt he's just fucked the hell out of.

Another HeyAll Classic

What else can I say? ;)

A well written and very different story. Arousing and special between a Mother and Son who had to deal with sexual feelings in a very different environment. Hot and we need to read more. Obviously, they both have to get through the rest of the day and night. The rest of the trip and what happens back home ?? Hopefully, the son lives at home while going to college. Maybe, that prim and proper Mom who is a strict professional; will tell the rest of the story about her sexual side from college to now. What she misses and how he can help. I think they can work out many details. Thank you .............

Hot...so hot....

Ohhhhhh my gosh.... your/this sorry is so incredibly HOT....

Please write some more......

more, please

like the other comments, we need the rest of the story. further chapters would be very nice esp. if they are as well composed as the first chapter.

More

More please. No sharing with other party guest. Just wonderful things between this sexy couple. Such a hot beginning.

Great Story

This is a great story and another chapter would have been great.

Wow!

I fantastic story! Please continue it :)

HOT more wanted

kept me reading right to the end

fun stuff

Wonderful story; well written; entertaining; stimulating. Yes indeed more stories please.

Excellent story...

5 stars. I loved the story, as far as it goes. However, I hope you add more, at least one or two chapters to cover what happens after the wedding and when they get back home.

Nice Story

Was hoping for another 10 pages. Hoping for more chapters soon

Nice one, HeyAll. Just a little bit rushed towards fulfilment. But there should be some mileage in a second part. After the wedding party...back home etc.

Very Hot!

What stands out the most for me was your minimalist approach in describing the characters. You left it up to the reader's imagination to picture what these people looked like instead of drawing them in great detail. It worked.

Very hot. I gave it 5 stars.

And you have NOP standards dear annony, none!!!!

Gave it a big old 5!!!!

Need a get home experience

What happens when you two get home?

That was great! Was hoping it would continue as least for the rest of the trip.

More!

You have just GOT to continuethis tale. The possibilities are endless.

loving the relief

my favorite writer god damn keep it up shit just wow your writings give me the most powerful orgasms ive had in a while

Mom

That's a good mom right there,she did everything for her son, he really didn't do a lot for her.

nice

Nice short story.

Got me aroused

Gave it 5-star rating. But it seems as if the son is late teens or early 20s. I'm almost 71, but I get hard again not too long after sex. I don't think what mom did would take all the starch out of sonny! I think he would be packing wood almost constantly. At nudist resorts, you are given a towel to use as necessary. That includes masking a stiffy.

hard on

I had a hard on all the way. I never did, but I did do a very tight sister more than once. This story reminded me. Hard on, hard on,C2F1 hard on.....

nice and hot

a good stroke, story waiting to hear more of their adventure with aunt Helen. keep on trucking tenbears43

Could I have someor pleez?

Please continue the tale.

Something Different Good Read****

Thanks for sharing this very entertaining story.

More please!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope there is more to come. Thanks for sharing it.

I loved it. Hopefully you keep it going

Loved it

Excellent!

5 stars

awesome. original, well written, would like to read a part 2, get the aunt and even the fiance involved?

5 stars

Great! Sequel please? After the wedding, the woman who caught them could join

Amazing

MORE please!!!!1