This was a really hot story. I liked the way you went smoothly from one person to the other but I noticed that sometimes you seemed to switch tenses. It didn't spoil the story and it was still hot but it was a bit distracting.
This is the first story of yours that I've read and now I want to read more of your stories. Also I'd love to vacation with John and Anna. Very hot write.
BD
WOW!! such an exciting story!! I didn't even realize until I finished I had my hand in my jeans!!
I can't wait to read more of your stories hun!
thank you!
English
Great hot erotic passion filled story!
I thought this story was great! The charachters are beleivable,and the chemistry is exciting, the sex is raw and hot!
I loved it!
Really hot
This was a really hot story. I liked the way you went smoothly from one person to the other but I noticed that sometimes you seemed to switch tenses. It didn't spoil the story and it was still hot but it was a bit distracting.
yum yum!
Very nice story, which cries out for a sequel. Is Brian going to fuck Anna in the next episode?
Very Hot
I liked this story very much, a nice story line and interesting characters. I'd love to read more about them.
Sailor
Hot hot hot!
Damnit. Now I want to take a vacation, too.....
Your best so far.....
This is the hottest of your stories I've read so far. Very well written, and keeps your attention. Super!
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This is the first story of yours that I've read and now I want to read more of your stories. Also I'd love to vacation with John and Anna. Very hot write.
BD
hot hot hot
WOW!! such an exciting story!! I didn't even realize until I finished I had my hand in my jeans!!
I can't wait to read more of your stories hun!
thank you!
xo
Thank you for the lovely story Honey....
Such a sensual and arousing experience…You are awesome writer…Thanks,
Valdo
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