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5*
What else ?
'bout time
Finally, a little bit of plot development re the Consultant of Crime! Your stories are one big tease regarding the over arching plot.
OK, where ...
Where can we get the damned Netflix, all episodes at once version? I'm ready to binge!
I'm surprised you don't get more comments.
This appears to be a very popular series, but it does not elicit many comments, which is too bad. Its obvious how much work you put into constructing and developing the immediate story plot that rides on top of the deeper interconnected plot among all the stories. You must use some kind of spreadsheet to keep everything organized? I think it is smart to place supporting story markers where helpful to allow readers to go back or catch up so they can keep all the characters and events straight.
Sure, the series is Batman-ish and cartoonish, but what's wrong with that? I do find the casual extramarital sex disappointing, since it indicates a lack of intelligence and self respect that the characters otherwise exhibit in their professional lives. Its not even polyamory, more just opportunistic rutting among consenting adults. It adds nothing to the stories and cheapens the underlying fabric of the community you have created. But I can skim past the fuckfesting and enjoy the suspense and drama of the interconnected plots.
Thank you for your time and efforts.
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