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An Unforgettable Melody Ch. 09

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/09/16

Very Good

Very good set up for the next part of their lives. Please continue. I also like your cameo of Dawn and George from "A Beautiful Wish" by 800lbs Gorilla. It was crafted well into the story. You are crafting such a wonderful romance genie story along the line I always hoped 800lbs Gorilla would have if he continued but I know there will be a challendge coming up for the two and I hope it does not spoil the romance. Thanks for your good work.

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by FormerReader03/09/16

You got it right...

The verse says Wonderful Counselor. However when Handel's Messiah is sung the singers always pause, making it sound like "Wonderful...Counselor..." two separate names. Not correct. Anyways, ominous ending to the chapter. I don't remember 800 lb. Gorilla's story but like Anonymous said I hope it doesn't derail the romance.

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by Anonymous11/19/16

Where

Gulf of Mexico???

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