The interactions are confusing. I feel I'm standing in a dark corner of the room watching and wondering what the hell just happened. Like an art house movie I can't grasp. You have done well letting us know about their prior discussions and that there is some surreptitious checking going on. He's being the tough owner, okay; he beats real dogs, too? He said he loves dogs and would treat a pet as such. There were agreements on activities but Anita violates them? He put the monitor in place, but was going to sleep? Hope he sleeps lightly.
This story is unique in that I can't imagine myself in any of the parts. You have left me solidly as an observer, an intregued and puzzled observer. It is unsettling.
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Anonymous03/08/16
Very Nicely Done
I am not a huge fan of the pet motif in BDSM play and relationships, for some of the reasons your male protagonist expresses, but these first two parts of the story demonstrate a thoughtful approach to the dynamics, and particularly between the master and his submissive as the submissive struggles with meeting the pet's needs while also being dominant enough.
The interactions are confusing. I feel I'm standing in a dark corner of the room watching and wondering what the hell just happened. Like an art house movie I can't grasp. You have done well letting us know about their prior discussions and that there is some surreptitious checking going on. He's being the tough owner, okay; he beats real dogs, too? He said he loves dogs and would treat a pet as such. There were agreements on activities but Anita violates them? He put the monitor in place, but was going to sleep? Hope he sleeps lightly.
This story is unique in that I can't imagine myself in any of the parts. You have left me solidly as an observer, an intregued and puzzled observer. It is unsettling.
Very Nicely Done
I am not a huge fan of the pet motif in BDSM play and relationships, for some of the reasons your male protagonist expresses, but these first two parts of the story demonstrate a thoughtful approach to the dynamics, and particularly between the master and his submissive as the submissive struggles with meeting the pet's needs while also being dominant enough.
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