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by Anonymous

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by 02/26/04

lacks description

This poem lacks description. True, you make a lot of statements. But they fall flat as a poem. Show us something-- make us feel something-- describe something.
Otherwise, what you've got is just a list of statements.

Xtaabay

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Sounds like a never ending annoying whining, more appropriate to a 6 year old than to an adult.

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by LeBroz01/27/07

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Sounds like a never ending annoying whining, more appropriate to a 6 year old than to an adult.

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