What's with all the name calling? What did you repeatedly describe her and her body parts using her heritage? You need an editor. While the premise of the story isn't bad, it is a little on the repetitive side. Couldn't even finish. This is he first bad review I've ever given on this site. Please keep trying!
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Hot read
Great story. Nice one shot of OC's hooking up and a best guy friend helping out his longtime childhood friend after she got her heart broken.
Sweet story
Great sweet story. Thanks xoxoxox Annette
What's with all the name calling? What did you repeatedly describe her and her body parts using her heritage? You need an editor. While the premise of the story isn't bad, it is a little on the repetitive side. Couldn't even finish. This is he first bad review I've ever given on this site. Please keep trying!
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