by TheLustWriter
You definitely have interested in the mystery girl. I am looking forward to learning more about her. Please right quickly.
...and i'm curious about the mystery girl now as well! Great chapter, keep up the amazing work!
Great story but it kind of ended weird..More to come???
Love the series! Please add more - what happens when the ability runs out?
Is he never tempted to have some of the women play with each other?
Maybe you'll get back to this. This knew girl who may have answers is intriguing.
With limited uses he needs to leave post suggestions to to all the gals to allow him to give more commands later. And he should go on a spree in babe rich environment. Maybe address a whole crowd at a women's gathering. Some older gals would mix it up as well.
I love the story and I agree with the other comments, BUT you really need to get somebody to proof read your stories before posting them.
I have enjoyed this series. I thought about two following chapters. One day, all four of his buddies hook up with him on the same day, including Michelle whom can't take any more waiting. After realizing it would not be a good ideal to add any more buddies, he goes to a comic con and has three of the most desirable women in the world.
" ... One day, all four of his buddies hook up with him on the same day, including Michelle whom can't take any more waiting. After realizing it would not be a good ideal to add any more buddies, he goes to a comic con and has three of the most desirable women in the world."
Great series. Let's continue it !