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by fanfare03/07/16

Fantasy, meet Reality!

Doesn't D&D acronym Donk & Doofus?

MST, congrats for such a wickedly fun little farce.

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by Anonymous03/08/16

Cute, and clever. Thanks!

Nice wit and play on words. Congrats.

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by Anonymous03/23/16

A fun read! Tricky, tricky.

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by xelliebabex03/25/16

In page one, I was immersed in the elf's story, but the jump to page two and the reality of the game jolted me a little. It may have just been the layout. It was a lot of fun to read this story. Highly enjoyable :)

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