- All
Comments (13) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
is there enough patience?
For Nathan to wait for Maxie to realize she can accept his love. For Maxie to realize poverty is as much a state of mind. For your readers to wait for the next little crumb...mmm
Smh
Maxie has a lot to learn about love.
when is the next chapter?
How cruel to leave us here
Good story
Please do not make us wait so long for an update...we
Enjoy your stories
glad to see the conflict.
I was ready for the introduction of a serious conflict. I'm anxious to see how you will bring resolution.
You have a wonderfully compelling grasp of language. Truly a treat to read. I look forward to following your work.
Thank you
Don't muck up a good thing Maxie!!
Sheesh
It's about darned time Maxie returned. Although she's giving me a headache with her negativity. Anxiously awaiting the next installment
Real shit!
Excuse my French, but you just nailed it with this installment! This is just what this story needed. Bravo!! Nice to know there are boogeymen hidden within the paradise of Maxie and Nathan. I can't wait to see how this resolves, and I'm loving the character depth. Hurry with the next chapter. :)
oh my!!! 5*
This story is just too dayum good girl! Maxie needs to get her head right!!! Her man is rich so let him spoil her! ;3
*****
A tentative five.
I can relate...
You don't want to feel in debted to someone because they can afford more. That should not be held over someone's head or used as something to bring against someone else. His intentions may not consist of that, but that's her experience. It does show how much they really know about each other though.
I'm still tuned in. No complaints.
YASSSSSS
I love how relatable this situation is , I have been in a relationship where the man I was with went above and beyond to do for me because he was better off than me and the moment he started treating me more like a pet than a partner and I told him I was leaving it was thrown in my face and used to keep me from leaving . it worked a few times before I came to my senses and moved on Brava on this chapter another home run
I so .love this story!!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to How Do You Like Your Eggs? Pt. 06 or
More submissions by ErisJade.