All Comments on 'Just Being Neighbourly Pt. 03'

by ilikeithot6308

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biphilmassbiphilmassabout 8 years ago
You did it again !!!!!

OMG what a great series and the cat fight was sooooooooooooo hot in every way you can describe a scene and it's like we are there !

5 stars and wish i could give you more.

Please give us at least one or two more chapters as Dan and Karen continue their love and marriage trip.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fantastic as always

Just LOVE your take on mature loving tall big-titted women! Best there's ever been! I was really worried when Karen began dating with other blokes, and provided Charlotte for Dan, but the way you resolved it was simply beautiful!

EromanticaEromanticaabout 8 years ago
Fantastic!

Christ, this was a great read.

XxMeteorxXXxMeteorxXabout 8 years ago
absolutely amazing

That was epic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
MORE

Don't stop now, a Cruise and wife follows. Then have the 2 of them get the wife drunk, and set her up to be taken. If not start another series.

ManofMithgarManofMithgarabout 8 years ago
WOW

Great story! I enjoyed it immensely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great Story

You did a great job with this story! Would like to see an ending involving the Cruise and the wedding and a brief of their life after.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Five Stars!

Could we have another chapter? Please!

AllintheheadAllintheheadalmost 8 years ago
Wow

I do hope you have plans of continuing this series at some point

myassisdraginmyassisdraginover 7 years ago
Please

Keep this one going. There has to be a final showdown with the bitch!!!!

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
I love this story!

A wonderful story I hope you'll continue! Thank you!

MunsonManMunsonManover 7 years ago
Bravo!

It just keeps getting better... Going to read Ch. 4 now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cute move!

A nice touch, to bring in Officer Emily Brewster from "Arresting Officer"!

ilikeithot6308ilikeithot6308over 7 years agoAuthor
Author here

Again, thank you for catching that detail. I'd thank you personally, but you are anonymous :-(

davlandavlanover 7 years ago
Nice touch

Glad to see Emily brews terms making an appearance in this story crossover always a good thing for developing crossover stories keep up the good work.

rapperbsrapperbsalmost 7 years ago
Another great one!

Loved the story and how you brought it to a close. Stirring the emotions of them both and making them realize the love they had for one another

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story, very well developed.

I love that you included a character from another one of your stories here. Emily Brewster from "Arresting" Officer"

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
really a great love story

5 stars. you are a really good writer and story-teller. and the sex is fantastic! just added you a a fav writer. i hope you continue to write for this site!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

hmm wow long time no comments. I am curious if you took some inspiration from Criminal Minds in naming the office. Paget Brewset played Emily Prentiss

ilikeithot6308ilikeithot6308almost 3 years agoAuthor

That's some detective work. Good call.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Montevideo/Punta del Este would make a nice cruise vacation destinationโ€ฆ Uruguay. Great (unusual) story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lol, Dan was behaving like a weak wimp in the presence of his ex!! She really flummoxed the pussy Dan in the coffee shop

oldpantythiefoldpantythief12 months ago

Still think they should have called the cops. Crazy bitch might return and burn down a house or two. Loved the story though.

NitpicNitpic8 months ago
This

This author does like his we scenes,to the point where they are monotonous.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG8 months ago

Very, very nice chapter...lots of emotion in this one...

Ex-wife really should have been arrested for THAT behavior...assault, and trespassing...no Judge would deny a restraining order based on those circumstances!!? I hate paperwork, too, but really liked putting people who deserved it in jail...and SHE deserved it!!

Get married on a cruise vacation...yeah, that'll get the neighborhood ALL stirred up!!

Five Stars...๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅ

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