From Jane-
I think I mentioned before that I read your other story, "Are you mine?" and loved it. This one was also amazing. Their dynamic is one of the sexiest I've seen, and I love the domineering bad-boy thing Jasper has. Plus, this story nicely continues their relationship and added a new kind of twist to it, while still holding a small storyline that you can see piece by piece. This one reveals some more in-depth feelings that Jasper has, too.
And this would be awesome as a whole series. I'd like to see (but obviously it's not up to me) a sort of make-up story, where Jasper and Evangeline kind of forgive each other and have some romantic sex, while still keeping their dynamic going.
When I saw this my heart leapt, I was so excited. I loved the first one so much and I was looking to see if there was a new chapter for My Shy Teen Slave, but I saw this instead and was really happy. I hope to see a new one soon, or a new chapter with Juliet and Clark, or maybe something totally different. Whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be wonderful and, frankly, hot as fuck.
-Jane
P.S. I love how the lyrics of the song go with the story and that you kept the Arctic Monkeys theme. "Sad to see you go / Was sorta hoping that you'd stay..."
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Anonymous03/22/16
I was so fixated on waiting for the new "My Shy Teen Slave" chapter to come out that I didn't even notice this one until today!!! I absolutely love it! You simply are amazing! Your writing is a pleasure to us all :). Please keep writing! I can't wait to see where this story is going!
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Anonymous04/16/16
Are you an arctic monkeys fan?
Do I wanna know? & R U mine? Lol
I love the coupling of jasper and Evangeline. So hot and oddly Romantic.
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Loved it as much as the others!
From Jane-
I think I mentioned before that I read your other story, "Are you mine?" and loved it. This one was also amazing. Their dynamic is one of the sexiest I've seen, and I love the domineering bad-boy thing Jasper has. Plus, this story nicely continues their relationship and added a new kind of twist to it, while still holding a small storyline that you can see piece by piece. This one reveals some more in-depth feelings that Jasper has, too.
And this would be awesome as a whole series. I'd like to see (but obviously it's not up to me) a sort of make-up story, where Jasper and Evangeline kind of forgive each other and have some romantic sex, while still keeping their dynamic going.
When I saw this my heart leapt, I was so excited. I loved the first one so much and I was looking to see if there was a new chapter for My Shy Teen Slave, but I saw this instead and was really happy. I hope to see a new one soon, or a new chapter with Juliet and Clark, or maybe something totally different. Whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be wonderful and, frankly, hot as fuck.
-Jane
P.S. I love how the lyrics of the song go with the story and that you kept the Arctic Monkeys theme. "Sad to see you go / Was sorta hoping that you'd stay..."
I was so fixated on waiting for the new "My Shy Teen Slave" chapter to come out that I didn't even notice this one until today!!! I absolutely love it! You simply are amazing! Your writing is a pleasure to us all :). Please keep writing! I can't wait to see where this story is going!
Are you an arctic monkeys fan?
Do I wanna know? & R U mine? Lol
I love the coupling of jasper and Evangeline. So hot and oddly Romantic.
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