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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/09/16

Awesome continue

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by Anonymous03/09/16

FUCK YOUR DAUGHTER WEEK

Now that fuck story shows some genuine talent!!!!! I normally don't like butt fucks but you even made this one half way palatable. Keep on fucking your daughter-wife, you love struck fuck head!!!!

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by Dark_Storm03/09/16

An OK story.

The story was OK. Nothing new or particularly groundbreaking.

Two things of note:

1) Yet another story perpetuating the myth of the internal hymen, the idea that you can partially penetrate the vagina BEFORE hitting "the barrier". The hymen is at the entrance to the vagina. Push anything past that entrance and you've already breached the hymen.

2) This sentence struck me as odd, "My wife didn't want anymore [children] but I hoped my daughter would be willing." I mean, no shit! His wife abandoned them TWELVE years before! Hasn't he divorced her yet?

Still, for a second attempt, it wasn't bad. A bit clichéd, but nothing unpalatable.

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by Averygoodlay03/09/16

Getting

into the story TILL the anal sex ruined it and I stopped reading, still gave it 3 stars for the first part.

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by Anonymous03/24/16

Outstanding - except the butt fuck!!!

My cock was hard as a rock during the first part and I cummed before the butt fuck, thankfully, as butt fucks "take the starch out" every fucking time!! Alwaysthefirsttime should concentrate on pussy fucks, tight pussies and big cocks and leave the butt fucks to the REAL QUEERS who fucking love them!

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by Anonymous11/04/16

incest is the best

guessed what was happening before it happened but continued reading, not into ass fucking, so this lowered the pleasure for me. as mentioned by another, no divorce after 12 years was puzzling. the myth about deformed children from incest is just that, there is no more chance of that than from none related sex producing children

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