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Mystery Ch. 02

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by Anonymous03/02/04

well...?

Just would like to see if I can get some feedback through this. I would like to write better, but hey, can't do that without feedback, so there ;)

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by Anonymous05/06/05

good

this is very good. this mystery has been well set up, and the short chapters lead to the suspense. all i could ask for is more...

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by Anonymous08/07/06

Mystery

Girl - you need to do more of this, the suspense is killing! (Maybe that's the intention?) In case you haven't guessed - I loved the two chapters so far....

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