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Uh oh...
Now even those closest to him are starting to doubt Don. In the words of one of my favorite TV characters of all time, "not good, defiantly not good." Nice writing as usual, I think its time for the Abacus to finally be retired, permanently. Great writing as usual, thank you for this!
another 5 star story.
always looking forward to the next posts, you put on here. I truly enjoy reading them. I have gotten hours of enjoyment from them, and don't care what others say, about them, I think they are magnificently written.
A lot left unresolved
There seems more left unresolved at the end of this story than usual. Even the case which gives it's name to the story is unresolved, as are several of the murders!
Excellent
Far more challenging this time around. I look forward to the pleasure-dome :-)
pe1er
You make a reasonable comment about the unresolved case. First, the whodunnit of the first crime was solved early, but that was a chance for readers to solve something. Second, if anyone got the thread connecting the badge people, that would be astute. The rest of it is unresolved and moving towards the overall story of our unfriendly neighborhood Consultant, but will ultimately be revealed. The person who left all the badges will be one of the hugest surprises of all...
Thanks for the comments, and please keep enjoying the stories. As always, I appreciate the votes!
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