Mmmmm. Thank you, may I have another? Hit all the correct spots for me. The slow, steady and soft progression of character development and action was excellent for the tone you were setting. I would definitely enjoy more of this story, especially with the positive tone. We romantic kinksters need action, too.
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Anonymous03/12/16
A Note from "Down-under"!
I really liked the way that the whole episode unfolded slowly - like it should, and I hope like it would. There was a gradual development of the characters as the story went on. Too many others just get to the sexual part straight away, - you didn't, and I liked that. I hope that the development of this story will go deeper and deeper in bondage as you write the next account. I will be looking for it!
Leo - from Brisbane in Australia
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Anonymous03/14/16
This is but another "twist" upon the old adage from a director to a young, budding actress: "you can't portray emotion until you experience emotion."
Well written, although I would not say that the characters were "developed"
This is one of the best BDSM stories I've read in a long time. I found no grammatical errors, which is a turn on in itself. As a reader it helps me to just enjoy the story without causing me to pause to make small edits and restructure sentences. I also enjoyed your BDSM style. I've been staying away from BDSM labeled stories lately. However, your work just turned me back on to the subject, thank you!
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Mmmmm. Thank you, may I have another? Hit all the correct spots for me. The slow, steady and soft progression of character development and action was excellent for the tone you were setting. I would definitely enjoy more of this story, especially with the positive tone. We romantic kinksters need action, too.
A Note from "Down-under"!
I really liked the way that the whole episode unfolded slowly - like it should, and I hope like it would. There was a gradual development of the characters as the story went on. Too many others just get to the sexual part straight away, - you didn't, and I liked that. I hope that the development of this story will go deeper and deeper in bondage as you write the next account. I will be looking for it!
Leo - from Brisbane in Australia
This is but another "twist" upon the old adage from a director to a young, budding actress: "you can't portray emotion until you experience emotion."
Well written, although I would not say that the characters were "developed"
Great writing, great story!
This is one of the best BDSM stories I've read in a long time. I found no grammatical errors, which is a turn on in itself. As a reader it helps me to just enjoy the story without causing me to pause to make small edits and restructure sentences. I also enjoyed your BDSM style. I've been staying away from BDSM labeled stories lately. However, your work just turned me back on to the subject, thank you!
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