Ally

Nice start, but you should have noted it as Chapter 1

Classic dilemma for a man in this situation, even one who isn't going through the trauma of separation and divorce. Looking forward to their further adventures.

The only obvious fault was the switch from third person to first.

What

Coffee are you kidding me

Good start, hopefully there is more, lots more.

teaser

It'll probably never be finished, like some of the others from this author. Don't waste your time.

Its a start.

I'll read it and rate it once its a story.

A good story

A good start but it has been nine months since this was posted and further chapters are needed to complete this story. This tale seems to have fallen into same hole that so many stories do on Lit, and that is the hole of forever incomplete stories.