Into the Fire Ch. 05

Grey update!

Great writer mama!

Awww!!!

These two are super cute! Keep up the good work!

*punts any impatients*

You're already frequently updating if you want to make the build up and sexual tension rise to chap 7 then soar throughout the story then go for it. You're leaving us wanting to know what happens next with each lengthy chapter, keeping us at our seats. (Not so much as leaving us unsatisfied with a dreadful cliff hanger)

One thing I can say about some of the interracial (bwwm) writers on here is that they need to be on Amazon and have there stories there instead of some of the terrible and/or cliche billionaire, dry dialogue ones onthere. (I'm amazed they're even selling *blink blink*) you(like some of the other writers in here (who either aren't active anymore or never finished their stories) have potential I can say to atleast sell stories like this on Amazon. If not as a profession maybe even a side gig.

Tess can be related to on Some levels(though she's a bit naive and immature), she has some growth needed in the story which is good as well. Shane As you can see is becoming our fave! I hope you'll come up with a backstory to share with us sense we kinda know what a douche Tess mom is.I'm not stressing or saying it has to be juicy/traumatic. But the thing about making us fall in love with Shane *heart eyes* is that we want to know more about him!!

Anyway thanks for taking your time out to write!

5*****

Love that this chapter was not that short. lol Now you have me thinking about chapter 7! Great update. Keep it up!

She was feeling insecure and he came at them straight on. She may as well start checking into prices of movers now, because he is not going to let her go.

She is going to have to stand up to Chasity.

Nice flow

I am really enjoying this...thanks

I had my doubts at first....

I began thinking, like your screen name you are giving us just a taste. Then I came to appreciate your writing and the flow of details. Please continue and take your time. You have our attention and have us hanging on by a thread awaiting your next instalment :)

It's not so much the sexual chemistry that keeps me reading. It's the build of the relationship period. How he accepts her, how she accepts him and the bit of drama keeping things interesting.

Still in love

With this story!! Great update! Looking forward to seeing this relationship grow.

So captivating!

5⭐️ I love the details and humor... Keep the coming.. We are waiting with baited breath.. Lol

Gotta love those Gingers

I'm really liking this one, you turned something that was seeming cliche at the end of chapter 3 (or whenever Sam decided to be an ass) and really turned it around. Looking forward to more from these two!

A good read...

Your style is alright, but I miss a bit of tension in the story.

I understand her insecurities but she is so blinded by it that she doesn't realize that she could get tired of Shane as well and hurt him.

You Rock!

Don't worry girlie, I think you are 100% doing an awesome job! I love redheads and they're hardly any stories with that aspect, so immediately I was like, "this girl is on to something"! I'm here with you wherever you continue ❤