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by Maria239402/27/04

!!!

this is a VERY interesting story, I wish you had completed it, but I will settle for this slice of life and wonder about "her" all day now...
:)

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by Angeline02/27/04

Well done

I liked this when I read it on the poetry forum. I wish it were a bit less enigmatic, if for no other reason than it's a fascinating story. On the other hand, maybe it's fine to let the reader's imagination do the work... :)

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