This is excellent. You have done a great job of capturing how Lisa feels. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
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Anonymous03/11/16
love it!
The has the potential to be an awesome story. My only complaint is that it is too short. I realize by the title that there is more coming but wpuld have liked a few more pages. Will be anixously awaiting part two.
Hi Requiax, congratulations on what I hope will be a great series! Oh the possibilities with Becky and Lisa! Don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapters!
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Anonymous03/15/16
Love your story,
You and Becky remind me of my friend, also named Lisa and I. I'm more the Becky character. My Lisa used to dare me to do things, often involving me ending up naked. I use to post some of the stories, after just tad bit of embelisment here.
I hope you continue the camping story. I can't wait to see where the camping story is headed. I once went on a canoe camping trip with her and two other girl friends. OMG, what an experience.
Drop me a line if you need any ideas .
Carrie
Carrie1p@hotmail.com
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Anonymous03/17/16
Suggestion
Your "chapters" are a bit too short to fully engage with. You could safely have rolled these first two instalments into one piece.
I like the way you have written this and words that you have not used. I'm not a prude but I don't like the C word when describing someone's genitals although it's hard when referring to a man not to use cock etc. I like your story an can relate to it well being a woman who has been in similar situations Thanks for writing.
English
Super sexy!
This is excellent. You have done a great job of capturing how Lisa feels. I hope the next chapter comes soon.
love it!
The has the potential to be an awesome story. My only complaint is that it is too short. I realize by the title that there is more coming but wpuld have liked a few more pages. Will be anixously awaiting part two.
super good
Hi Requiax, congratulations on what I hope will be a great series! Oh the possibilities with Becky and Lisa! Don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapters!
Love your story,
You and Becky remind me of my friend, also named Lisa and I. I'm more the Becky character. My Lisa used to dare me to do things, often involving me ending up naked. I use to post some of the stories, after just tad bit of embelisment here.
I hope you continue the camping story. I can't wait to see where the camping story is headed. I once went on a canoe camping trip with her and two other girl friends. OMG, what an experience.
Drop me a line if you need any ideas .
Carrie
Carrie1p@hotmail.com
Suggestion
Your "chapters" are a bit too short to fully engage with. You could safely have rolled these first two instalments into one piece.
Thanks for writing. Hope to read more of yours
I like the way you have written this and words that you have not used. I'm not a prude but I don't like the C word when describing someone's genitals although it's hard when referring to a man not to use cock etc. I like your story an can relate to it well being a woman who has been in similar situations Thanks for writing.
two thumbs up
i like the small store naked girl stories and this one hasn't disappointed great read hope more soon.
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