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How Do You Like Your Eggs? Pt. 07

byErisJade©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/11/16

*****

A strong five. :)

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by fawnsage03/11/16

Amazing!

Please give them a happy ending and Maxie a job!

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by Sweet2touch03/11/16

Hmm!!

For someone who stated they don't need or like to write, that was one chapter that captured some pretty raw emotions! Anyone who writes in this manner doesn't have to need or want, you MUST write! You've taken us on a journey in these 7 short chapters some "writers" take 15 chapters to do and still don't get it right!

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I would be rather sad if/when you take your "leave of absence"

You have such talent and a gift for writing. It is always a joy to read your submissions. I'm kinda hooked on knowing what will happen. I don't have any preconceived notions on what will happen. Please at least make it worth reading and don't rush the ending. I'd hate to see good writing spoiled by not taking your time.

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by pnkntn03/12/16

Amazing

As with any relationship, Nathan and Maxie bring there life lessons with them and the other accepts and works there way through it. EJ, how you bring there wants, needs, desires and insecurities out in them is amazing and a joy to read.
Will it be Tomato Soup and Shag Carpet or Marble Floors and Prime Rib?

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by Anonymous03/15/16

Amazing'

This is great story writing: shonda rhimes needs u on her team. you are a very talented writer. i'm going to hate to see you disappear: i hope that u reconsider. Or share another story with us in the near future.

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Give Nathan a chance Maxie, he is not the asshole that your momma dated.

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by ariesgirl03/22/16

Her fears are understandable but she is so blinded and guarded with thinking she is going to get hurt that she doesn't realize she can hurt Nathan just as well. His net worth doesn't make him invincible. There is no guarantee that any relationship will be happy all the time. One or both people will hurt the other in some kind of way.

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