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by Anonymous

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by GrandPaM03/13/16

Ugh...

You...wrote this is 2nd person.

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by JackStrange03/14/16

Wow!

I love your first person... and you let me fantasize about being the YOU in the story. Would love to do a duet with you or whatever they call it here..

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by Anonymous03/14/16

Outstanding ! Need more stories like this one!

Outstanding ! We need more stories like this one Bravo!

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by Anonymous03/17/16

Not first person

This story is good, but it's written in second person. You can tell because the point of view of the story is from a "you", or the perspective of your audience. First person would be if it took place from the point of view of one of the characters, using the words "I" and "my" to tell the story. Good work, though.

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