And there you have my first comment left on this site. Re: your epigraph on the comments of others: Sweet Sarah, you and I both know we have never had two lovers who were exactly alike, right? And just so, every writer has their own accent, my American one charmed by your Brit-speak. Actually encouraged me to sign up as a member.
Enjoyable read and you have a knack of getting your reader into the eroticism. Sure there are a few errors, but nothing that spoils the read. If you want an editor please get in touch; if not, just keep writing and ignore the idiots. English girl in Roussilon sounds heavenly - must get on the TGV.
English
Welcome back, Sarah!
I loved it, whether it's a standalone or turns out to be the beginning of a series, an amazing read. Good job!
You don't care about
people being upset by your myriad errors?
I don't care about your disrespect for your readers!
1*
Fun read
Fun to read, thanks.
And there you have my first comment left on this site. Re: your epigraph on the comments of others: Sweet Sarah, you and I both know we have never had two lovers who were exactly alike, right? And just so, every writer has their own accent, my American one charmed by your Brit-speak. Actually encouraged me to sign up as a member.
Short & fun
Enjoyable read and you have a knack of getting your reader into the eroticism. Sure there are a few errors, but nothing that spoils the read. If you want an editor please get in touch; if not, just keep writing and ignore the idiots. English girl in Roussilon sounds heavenly - must get on the TGV.
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