My god, Anne, you keep getting hotter and hotter! I didn't even know there was a 2nd chapter, I was just browsing through your stories and happened to find it. Great job! Need tissue...very sticky...
First she ran back to her room, thinking that Stacy was right about him being a "freak", and yet just minutes later she was in her brothers bed buck naked getting him to cum buckets! A really big mood swing there. However...I give you the benefit of the doubt, as it was just too damn hot to get too heavy in the critiquing department. Still...one moment your living in bla-bla suburbia, and then your getting jiggy with a brother AND your best girl friend...No wonder it's called "fantasy".
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Anonymous07/31/06
Well
I thought the first was beautiful, but the second... maybe its because Stace strikes me as such a shallow, selfish bitch, but the fact that they would be pawns for her wasnt nearly as exciting. maybe her sister should come home instead? Just a thought.... Id like to hear what she and her brother were always talking about :)
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Anonymous12/13/06
United
A most delightful story, ( I wonder if its true?) , it really deserves a follow up with the brother servicing both , with near misses, eventually fathering their babies,
I'm amazed when reading these stories it seems as though there're in a hermetically sealed envirenment, no mention of the delightful tastes and smells
of all that sex, as usually the rooms and house would reek of it.
love Jemma
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Anonymous07/11/07
nice
the first one was better
but this is still pretty good
hope to see a ch.3
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Anonymous12/17/07
Great
Both, the first and the second are great storie and very well written. I'd like to know how the relationship between brother and sister develops from right now and what kind of role Stace ist going to play. I really want to know more and just can't await Ch.3! Thanks for righting this story
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Anonymous01/06/08
complete screw up in the end
You could have made it more romantic but threesome in the end has caused the story to lose the touch. i was expecting some more romance in the story
I won't lie, the first one was amazing, but this one is still great. it could had been better if it was a bit longer. It started out really good and I like the final touch with her friend joining it. can I look forward to a part 3?
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Anonymous02/26/08
Part of this should have been in Ch. 1
When I read the first few paragraphs of what went through Anne's mind, I knew that should have been in Ch. 1, and it would have seriously helped out the story, had it been inserted as the transition between her being disgusted, then thinking about that, getting used to the idea and liking it--then doing it with him. But again, him ejaculating a huge load is just not realistic and not what the average guy can do. So...how did Stacey get bi? That's dropped on us, without any hint she's playing both sides.
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Anonymous04/29/08
bad
you expect us to believe that after being ignored for 19 years she is going to suddenly forget all the shit he has put her through get real after he told her how he felt if he was lucky and she didn't kill him it would probably take atleast 1-2 years for her to forgive him try to keep it sounding realistic people do not just flip over like that
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Anonymous05/22/08
liked it- but i like ur lesbo stories more duno y?
i like this story . but after reading ur other works like valerie, or how can she sleep etc etc . i expect more from u
, and its like some good performances overshadow others and ppl expect the same
Much better on the feelings and the descriptions of the sex, but other than the 7" cock and dark eyes, we still don't know what the brother looks like; and what's the deal with Stacy?! One minute she's disgusted and horrified, and the next, she's in a threesome with these two "fucked up freaks", with no explanation other than that she is her "best friend". The changes of heart need to be more gradual, and need to be explained. Otherwise, it's just not believeable, even for a fantasy!
felt like you rushed through the story and left details there but still over all how did she stop from hating it to loving her brother in less than a couple seconds.... answer back if u can...
I think that those who don't give a name and comment as anonymous with bad things to start about someone's hard work,are to scared for some reason. I also think you should keep the story going,its very good and I would love to see a 3rd chapter of this story! Keep up the good work!
Here when I was ready to buy the supposition that you were straight, I found myself getting turned on reading about you kissing Stacey. And then, fucking your brother as well. I could love you, Ann. You are delightfully kinky.
Liked your story thought it was really sweet my sisters are crazy about me not in that way of course. But I know they have admired me and thought I was fine to look at.Five feet eight and one half inchs blond hair blue eyes and built like limousine bull.It could have happened but it didn't. They think I am an angel but I'm just a good brother.
English
Chapter 3
Dear Anne:
I just hope there is a Chapter 3. Great story.
Bil
I don't usually comment.
I do not usually leave comments but this was a great one. Thanks
Another good chapter!
Liked it! I would like to have more explicit details with the next installment.
Thanks for writing.
sexmate
Wow!
My god, Anne, you keep getting hotter and hotter! I didn't even know there was a 2nd chapter, I was just browsing through your stories and happened to find it. Great job! Need tissue...very sticky...
Fantastic
Loved Chapter1,Loved Chapter2 and I know I`m gonna love Chapter3
Interesting story, well written. More, please.
I enjoyed this story, it was interesting and well written. Please write more.
Keep up the good work
Don't stop now the story is getting good. Do a Ch.3
great
I loved this. Hope to see a chapter 3
Truly hot
One of the hottest stories I have read. The emotions that went with the action just made the story.
nice smooth story
Hey getting better and i love it and keep it up ch. 03
Great story!
What a great story! I can only hope that there'll be a chapter 3 and that it comes soon!
Great
love it hope to see a ch 3 and more!!
Loved the twist at the end.
The first story was excellent, but this story was even BETTER!!!! Would love to read follow-up stories on how the "threesome" continued.
unfair
I have 6 sisters! & nothing like that ahh but to dream.
the extremes
First she ran back to her room, thinking that Stacy was right about him being a "freak", and yet just minutes later she was in her brothers bed buck naked getting him to cum buckets! A really big mood swing there. However...I give you the benefit of the doubt, as it was just too damn hot to get too heavy in the critiquing department. Still...one moment your living in bla-bla suburbia, and then your getting jiggy with a brother AND your best girl friend...No wonder it's called "fantasy".
Well
I thought the first was beautiful, but the second... maybe its because Stace strikes me as such a shallow, selfish bitch, but the fact that they would be pawns for her wasnt nearly as exciting. maybe her sister should come home instead? Just a thought.... Id like to hear what she and her brother were always talking about :)
United
A most delightful story, ( I wonder if its true?) , it really deserves a follow up with the brother servicing both , with near misses, eventually fathering their babies,
I'm amazed when reading these stories it seems as though there're in a hermetically sealed envirenment, no mention of the delightful tastes and smells
of all that sex, as usually the rooms and house would reek of it.
love Jemma
nice
the first one was better
but this is still pretty good
hope to see a ch.3
Great
Both, the first and the second are great storie and very well written. I'd like to know how the relationship between brother and sister develops from right now and what kind of role Stace ist going to play. I really want to know more and just can't await Ch.3! Thanks for righting this story
complete screw up in the end
You could have made it more romantic but threesome in the end has caused the story to lose the touch. i was expecting some more romance in the story
not as good as the first... but still damned good
I won't lie, the first one was amazing, but this one is still great. it could had been better if it was a bit longer. It started out really good and I like the final touch with her friend joining it. can I look forward to a part 3?
Part of this should have been in Ch. 1
When I read the first few paragraphs of what went through Anne's mind, I knew that should have been in Ch. 1, and it would have seriously helped out the story, had it been inserted as the transition between her being disgusted, then thinking about that, getting used to the idea and liking it--then doing it with him. But again, him ejaculating a huge load is just not realistic and not what the average guy can do. So...how did Stacey get bi? That's dropped on us, without any hint she's playing both sides.
bad
you expect us to believe that after being ignored for 19 years she is going to suddenly forget all the shit he has put her through get real after he told her how he felt if he was lucky and she didn't kill him it would probably take atleast 1-2 years for her to forgive him try to keep it sounding realistic people do not just flip over like that
liked it- but i like ur lesbo stories more duno y?
i like this story . but after reading ur other works like valerie, or how can she sleep etc etc . i expect more from u
, and its like some good performances overshadow others and ppl expect the same
Better, And Worse
Much better on the feelings and the descriptions of the sex, but other than the 7" cock and dark eyes, we still don't know what the brother looks like; and what's the deal with Stacy?! One minute she's disgusted and horrified, and the next, she's in a threesome with these two "fucked up freaks", with no explanation other than that she is her "best friend". The changes of heart need to be more gradual, and need to be explained. Otherwise, it's just not believeable, even for a fantasy!
i jus t didnt feel it
felt like you rushed through the story and left details there but still over all how did she stop from hating it to loving her brother in less than a couple seconds.... answer back if u can...
dont listen to the complainers...
I think that those who don't give a name and comment as anonymous with bad things to start about someone's hard work,are to scared for some reason. I also think you should keep the story going,its very good and I would love to see a 3rd chapter of this story! Keep up the good work!
nice
i agree that you should add more as it definitly doesnt feel done yet
You sexy Devil, You!
Here when I was ready to buy the supposition that you were straight, I found myself getting turned on reading about you kissing Stacey. And then, fucking your brother as well. I could love you, Ann. You are delightfully kinky.
interesting
it's very interesting but I'm partially confused I mean is there going to be a part 3 or does it just end there like I said I'm confused
Sweet Story
Liked your story thought it was really sweet my sisters are crazy about me not in that way of course. But I know they have admired me and thought I was fine to look at.Five feet eight and one half inchs blond hair blue eyes and built like limousine bull.It could have happened but it didn't. They think I am an angel but I'm just a good brother.
Nice story, just a shame........
.......that you never finished it...............!
Wow!
I like it.. hope you finish the story with a few more installments of it. 5 star rating again, and favorited as well.
Stace should have been there
Maybe in the next chapter
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