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An Unforgettable Melody Ch. 11

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by FowlRich03/15/16

nice

Nice plot twist.

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by FormerReader03/15/16

Surprised

Enjoyable chapter. But I had to point out 2 things: first, i'm surprised a Star Wars fan would get Princess Leia's name wrong LOL. Second, the correct spelling is "aisle" for what you walk on, "isle" is a short form of "island".

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by auguy8603/15/16

DAMN YOU AUTOCORRECT!

Can't believe I missed Leia's misspelling! Oh well...

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by soreirei03/15/16

Oh poo the ex

Maybe Melody can just shot her to the moon. A good place for people who are dense and insensitive.

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by auguy8603/16/16

Don't worry soreirei...

Selena isn't the ex. Re-read Ch. 00 again. You'll love the next installment.

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by Anonymous03/16/16

This is the last place I expected a spoiler for star wars to be.

No, I haven't seen it yet, I'm waiting until I can see it at home.

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by rightbank08/23/16

I was wondering

what happened to Selena

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