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by Angeline02/28/04

Uh huh

I'm dying to know if it really happened, but asking would be so indiscreet, lol. Needless to say, it's well written with er vivid imagery. :)

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by Anonymous02/29/04

I love fireworks

Both kinds. :-)

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by WickedEve02/29/04

Love the poem

This is really good:

incineration, like chain-smokes
only more breathless

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by LeBroz06/05/08

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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.



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