All Comments on 'The Melting'

Lalenya good story. I read the other two and seems like they are basically tied together somehow. Maybe because I read your biograpy that tells me you enyoy being seduced by older men. Your stories weren't perfect but far be it from me to correct them. I am not an English teacher just a horny old man that likes to read all these stories. I hope you continue to write and try to seduce us old guys :) !