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As I said...the story is going down...
As I said...the story is going down...What a friend!!! It was his fantasy to fuck her...so he took her word as true and forgot all about real friendship...2*
Poorly written
As was noted after the first chapter, an editor would greatly benefit this story. The mistakes are so numerous that they ruin the story. Not good.
Um
I think i lost the POV several times.
Thanks***
For the read.
5
But really, there is no man on earth named Vicky. Where the crap u come up with something like that. Very believable story, except for the word vicky.
The husband wants it to happen
and that makes it ok...no cheating. 5*
☆☆☆☆☆ (4.6/5.0 = 92 = A) MY CUP OF TEA
2 very good friends, Jai & Vicky.
Jai is married to Nikki, whom he loves truly, deeply, madly (a tad too madly by mainstream standards, though).
Vicky is totally infatuated with Nikki. I don't blame him.
Nikki (a) is very sexy and (b) has a wild side (chances are her libido is turbo charged)
Frends tend to share everything with one another, but wives are EXCLUDED. Luckily there are exceptions to all rules: thus, Nikki, Jai & Vicky's shared dream can come true!
Nikki is a keeper! I wish she were my wife.
Long live Ménage à trois!
A very good story; i gave it a 4.7
Nikki is the best. She deservedly gets five stars (*****)
This old, old joke came to mind:
WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A GOOD DIPLOMAT & A CLASSY LADY?
If a good diplomat says Yes, he means Maybe
If a good diplomat says Maybe, he means No
If a good diplomat say No, he actually is not a good diplomat.
If a classy lady says No, she means Maybe
If a classy lady says Maybe, she means Yes
If a classy lady says Yes, she actually is not a classy lady
THE STORY IS BRILLIANTLY CONCEIVED AND MASTERFULLY WRITTEN! DIALOGUES ARE BELIEVABLE, CONVINCING, REALISTIC, NATURAL
I gave this chapter a 5 (five stars!) It is my cup of tea. I felt it was custom made for me. I LOVED it!
Nikki is a keeper!
StrangeIndianWriter knows very well how to end a chapter so we can't wait to read the next one.
I strongly disagree with 2 comments, namely:
- Impo_61 (03/16/16): This is a Loving Wife story, which means that if her husband has a good friend, he will try to fuck the wife. In my mind, women like Nikki are sent to Earth by a Godess of Love to meke people happier.
- anon (03/16/16) 'Poorly written': in my experience, this story reads well and gives us the right amount of info. It was written in good English, very precise and gramatically correct. In my book, a story about a woman like Nikki can be in broken English & still get full five stars!
LIKE IT!
Nikki:
in my book, you are a keeper.
Your karma is to make two men happy.
When and if Vicky is out of the picture, someone will take his place.
If i were your husband's best friend, i would be in 7th heaven 24/7!
If you were my wife, i would never leave you. I would worship your body; kiss every square inch of it, knowing full well it is not only mine; and fuck you like man possessed.
It should be a wife's natural right to fuck her husband's good friends as long as they are single
:-)
I really liked this story
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