Road Trip

Nice

Loooved your story, thanks.

very nice, thank you

Tears

Too many tears of joy. It makes the story a farce.

Nice story

If it's a true story, quit smoking. Set the right example and keep yourself healthy and attractive for him (for each other). If it's a fantasy, smoke away.

Loving example

This mother is a great example to mothers everywhere. She loves her son and does not allow the silly incest taboo to prevent her from showing her son love, she infact wallows in the delicious taboo sex that she has with her young stud. Mommy knows that her son wants to return to her womb and once again suck on her breasts. This mother has the ultimate pleasure of seeing the lust in her own sons eyes as he approaches her naked body, to feel Sexually desirable as her son fondles her breasts, gropes her ass, and spreads her thighs and penetrates her with his young hard cock. Best of all mommy can see her son's eyes eyes rollback, her him howl in orgasm, and feel him unload his seed into her womb. This mother may know that society says she should not allow her son to mount her, nor should she let her son unload his seed into her womb but mommy also knows it makes her son very happy and that her orgasms are so strong this way that her addiction to the incest orgasm will supersede all rational objections. Mommy will spend most nights from now on being her own sons playground as her fills her womb over and over again. I do hope that when mummy's belly begins to swell with her own child/grandchild that she will give give up on smoking. Perhaps she can start sucking her son's cock instead of smoking that way she can make it hard enough to fuck for the fourth or fifth time that day.

a wonderful story

I love how Jimmy's mom treats her baby boy, how she understands her kid's needs and urges, and, as she's always done, meets those urgent needs and satisfies those deep urges. The anon who wrote "Loving Example" nails it. "This mother is a great example to mothers everywhere. She loves her son and does not allow the silly incest taboo to prevent her from showing her son love." There are lots and lots of Jimmies--and Kevins and Seans and Billies and so on--lusty young males with hard fat cocks and heavy loaded balls who ache for the care and concern of their mom. They're "young and hung and full of cum," and they've got to shoot their semen like all the time. Jerking off is for 13 year olds and a compliant girlfriend isn't always around. It's up to their mothers to smile and spread their thighs and welcome their darling sons back up the same warm wet hairy hole they came out of, their own mommy's glorious cunt. Nothing can ever feel so thrilling, so loving, just so damn right, to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt. Moms who truly cherish their boys are happy to make them the grinning young motherfuckers they yearn to be.

A truly wonderful surprise of a story

I didn't expect to read such a lovely story, full of compassion, passion, genuine love and spiced with steaming sex. Hopefully there's more to come as the ride isn't over yet.

5*+++

Appreciation!

Thanks to everyone who sent such glowing praise. I am truly honored that you enjoyed my labor of love. First, it truly is fiction. I wanted to write a story that I would love to read. A story with love, passion, and romance. The smoking part comes from my love of film noir, watching a woman smoke and contemplate. I don't smoke, nor does any of my family. However, I did put in there that Mom doesn't want her son to smoke. She IS a loving Mom, after all! I don't know if I have a second story in me. Only time will tell. Again, thank you all!

Hot Story*****

Thanks for sharing.

I liked the story very much. I gave it 5 stars and a favorite point. If I might make a couple of suggestions, get an editor or have someone preview the story with fresh eyes (I'm not sure "shoke" is a word). Also, try not to start too many sentences with "And", especially one after the other.

Good story

But I suggest slowing down a tad on the explanation of the sex and feelings for it felt a little rushed and the story needed editing. ***

Thanks, Sex4lf57!

Thanks for the advice, Sex4lf57! I thought that I had all of the typos out after the 3rd or 4th read-through. Then I read it after publication and I groaned (not in the pleasurable way!). You're right,a fresh set of eyes always is in order!

Love, love, love... glorious mom-son love...

I am speechless. In less than one page you have managed to convey the emotions many mothers and sons feel. The heat of the moment, the sensations when the mom's cunt meet the cock she created, the emotions, the tears, the sheet ecstasy... This is one of the best stories I've read in this genre.

I am sooooo disappointed that this is a fantasy. And yes, film-noir point taken, but I did not care too much for the smoking. Oh well.

And, to add to Sex4lf57's comment, in case you are unable to find an editor (though there are several friendly souls on Lit), I find that taking a print of the story and reading it again with a cup of coffee and a pencil in hand helps catch a lot of errors - for me, a screen just never cuts it... just a suggestion.

I really, really hope you will continue to write more stuff on mom-son love. 5 stars. Thank you for this.

soooooo beautiful!!!

Its how many mothers and sons feel but are too afraid to act on their urges! I'm lucky that my boy feels the same about me that I feel about him. We are in love and will always be. ;-)

Nice Job, Less Smoke

So few stories out there from a lonely mother's perspective, Unless it was your intention to use her smoking to show some frustration on her part, I suggest ditching the cigarettes, I don't think it really adds value to the story.

hot love and lust

a good, mother and son fuck story evolving into love; will be waiting for further adventures. keep on trucking tenbears 43.

smokinf and incest

more please, absolutely wonderful

I think you overuse the word love.