The Loving Wife Story

Love it

Great flash story

5/5

Different

and fun.

Hah

That was fun. 5 stars!

When fiction imitates 'wife' and vice-versa ...

Happily ever after depends on your POV. SUCK ON IT TAZZ. First.

Hahahaha !

Nice little flash story ! loved the JPB and MM taglines also. Nice to see you posting again , you were always a personal favorite, a True LW legend ! Also , thanks for leaving the voting open, unlike some authors here lately that only want to here from their little cheering squads !
5*'s
Cpprcrk

Self-referential crap

A waste of time and effort.

Amusing

Amusing, part 2 would be interesting if her husband was not writing it, but if another more mysterious writer was doing the writing and it was more like a curse, perhaps taking her on a grim spiral to her demise.

A DOUBLE GUESS ON WHATS NEXT

while reading from a script/ TK U MLJ LV NV

About sums the whole world up

Nice one. Made me laugh.

A good and above all funny flash story...

A good and above all funny flash story...All is said in it...4*

Interesting twist. ***

The tribute to JPB was

funny. He has Pauline French in many of his stories.

Different!

“give her a chance to explain and plead with him.” – Why do these cheating wives always want to “explain”? Like there is ANY “explanation” that could excuse her cheating, or that SHE would accept from her husband!

Praise from other authors

Good story! The praise from other authors here is testament to that. Concise and fun to read.

Excellent

Fun way to start the morning, for me, not Pam

*****

Nice bit of flash to go with the morning joe!

Way to

Break the fourth wall without breaking the fourth wall.

Neat little flash story...

Well written and thought out. Definitely a 5.

Great story!

Even though it was just a flash story, it all followed along to what all of us have read so many times, and enjoyed here in LW.
5 *'s only because we can't give more

Thanks for the fun read

5*

Nice shot at the LW section!

You even managed to work one of JPB's characters into the fray. The Pam Anderson bit was maybe over the top, but if you had posted a picture of Pam and placed this in Illustrated Stories the farce would have been complete!

Well done!

Thanks!

Thanks For Sharing****

Good read kind of out the box. We need a little out the box in L W !!!!

a cute entry...

that if put in humor and satire, would have been lost to obscurity. No markdown for aiming this right at the target audience.

Usually, I don't like stories that reference Literotica directly. But the humor used in this, made it that much more palatable.

It seems like you had fun writing this. That is good. It is even better when the fun you are having comes through the page to positively affect the reader. Well Done!

Thanks for your efforts, here. I am off to check out other stuff from you......

Five star flash story

Not a wasted word in this one. Well done PS!

Excellent

Great tale. To hell with the cheaters.

Five Stars

I don't agree with subject matter conclusion but great story

This is all about good writing and an active imagination. Love the storyline, almost a parody. Great job. xoxoxoxo Annette

Wow!

A five star story on originality alone.

Did Not See It Coming ...

Didn't see it coming until the gum-chewing blonde came to the office! Given the numerous references to Sweetie's uneasiness, I should have! Just not sure why she stopped the affair before she read the LW story. THAT part was implausible!

5* (anyway!)

great story needs ending

Finish it how she begs ans he makea her pay

Needs

Needs a ENDING.

Interesting how you make a big deal about copyright but have no qualms about using ideas and characters from other authors.

3*s

Thank you for this story. To the point, technically correct, common plot. Funny ! So gave you 3*s. I know there's more insightful, emotionally moving stories you could write!!


AMerryman

Criminy!

Whoever heard of putting sugar in a 'real man's coffee?

i gave you a five just the same.


Jedd Clampett

Amusing

Nice to see a bit of humour. Not HDK but amusing just the same.

Kind of fun, and an acceptable twist on using Literotica as part of the story line.

Most authors references to Literotica look like they are sucking up to the web site owners in some fashion. This story was more oblique, and acceptable. Thanks for the humor.

@ carvohi

True, but at least he didn't put milk in it too. ;)

wonder what...

So okay, what is poor Pauline getting sued for?

Process servers serve papers for more than just divorces.

Lots of fun

Nice spoof by an excellent writer.

I Enjoy A Bit Of Humor

The humor was the driving force behind this story. But if I read a cuckold/divorce story using my name and my girlfriend's name, I can get pretty paranoid. An easy 5-Star rating for this one.

Fabulous, impressive, engaging, tongue in cheek and cleanly written.....

.....it's so refreshing to have a man take a stand and cheaters experience rational consequences for their cheating.
I'm so glad to see someone creatively address the problem and get the job done. I don't care much whether the cheater is the husband or the wife. Vows were broken, along with trust betrayed, love killed and hope obliterated. I don't much care whether it's civil, like this one, or a BTB.....what I care, is that the injured party doesn't take it laying down, doesn't wimp out, and doesn't "let it pass". God, people, is everyone here aware that war has broken out over lesser affronts than adultery? And rightfully so. The aggrieved, injured party has a right to redress the breach and make alternate future plans. I, for one, think the courts have been co-opted by special interest with the claim that the poor woman is the best choice for the kids and so, is entitled to a continuation of her life....just without the close, intimate experience with her husband. But economically and in every other way, "for the sake of the children" she cannot be allowed to suffer any further indignity. Well.
IF she is the betrayer, she should be ejected wholesale and left with nothing. Minimum visitation, supervision and no other access to the life she once enjoyed.
IF he is the betrayer, he should lose everything and be required, almost slave-like to sustain a life and lifestyle for his ex-wife and children he can no longer personally enjoy. Consequences, people...both for the betrayer and the betrayed.....they're what's for breakfast. And family law is so stupid, blind and prejucicial as to be the bigger problem. Where people can simply no longer get along (true no-fault), then an equitable slips is the right thing. When did things get so damn fucked up? When did it become a business, this repeated marrying and divorcing? Chronic repeat offenders, need and big red "B" tattooed on their foreheads, so all can see, they are a poor prospect for anything more intimate or personal or lasting than casual sex. "B"? Betrayer. Betrayal leading to divorce is not always down adultery row....although in the majority of cases, it is. Them maybe for them, it should be an "A".....
In any event, thank you for an enjoyable and believable, if slightly sardonic, story.

Remember it is me making the comment

An acceptable offering. Which for me is pretty high praise.

that was fun

thanks

Thanks for the offering.

Brilliant

and very original. Well done.

pitiful

immature, hateful, low-class, and as writing, it was really so obvious it was boring as hell

Funny

Made me smile, very enjoyable. Everyone needs to have a little humor injected into their day.

meh

previous submissions were better

Well Done!

Its been ages since I signed on to Lit. I looked up you as well as a few of my other favorite authors. I was not disappointed with your latest offering, 5* as usual.
Jen

That was hilarious

I loved it. Pauline French, MM, the gum chewing process server, you pulled in all the cliches and loving wives tropes and blended them with humor and style. Huge props for the entertainment. Thanks.