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by WindChyme03/05/04

Naughty

I liked it...but the 75% means you could tighten it up and really leave readers ticked off and chuckling at the same time. You're just not finished yet.

Bad!!! ;-)

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by Anonymous06/22/07

made me laugh

I smiled and laughed. thanks.

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by Anonymous03/18/14

Too Funny!

I was reading along and then.....What? The oven door? Are they in the kitchen?
Too Fuckin' Funny!!! Laughed my as off!! Great Job!

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