Anna Succumbs to Neighbor's Cock

Well, that was worth skipping

Couldn't read most of it. Just too inane and dull. It heated up a little at the end but the bad writing and editing just killed it. "Your" means "belonging to you." "You're" means "you are." Things like that, you know. Write and read, read, read. Try again, but with a better story.

1 star

You saved nobody. Waste of time.

11 inches! Of course!

Whenever I get to the part where the dick is 10 or 11 inches, I go right to the end and score it a 1 star for lack of imagination and originality. Try to make it more realistic so we can suspend our disbelief. The story was going good right up to that buzz kill.

Right...

Got to love those 11 inch cocks. Why not two feet? Now that would really be hot! Got to give the wife bigger tits, though. About 50 HH would be great.

Big Cocks Rule

Well unlike the other commentators I loved this story and would also love it to be true.
Having one's wife taken by a hung stud is just so erotic and this story followed a very believable process of seducing the younger woman by his physicality. Hubby should benefit from his wife's extra sexual interest and his own voyeuristic satisfaction. The stud packing anything over 8" is always going to come out on top. This sequence of events made for a very enjoyable read. Thanks 5*

Well I guess he got his wish, he is completely and totally useless now.
She seems to have no need of him, except for money and a bitching target.
I do wonder when they will turn up the public humiliation, because that always follows.

Naw, he was totally useless from the moment she met him.

It just took her some time and experience to realize it.

Stupid stories from stupid writers who have no job, no self-respect, and No Talent.

I think it was great

I have a little 4 inch cock and the truth is i appreciate that there are bigger 6 plus men out there that are willing to help a couple in need. I love my wife and she loves me and she gets a bigger man cock like she needs and deserves. Thank you for the great story

We will always be able

To get really sick reading your best attempts... Did you ever think about reading your stories out loud in front of a doctor's office... he would likely make you a partner or at least let you have a commission for each patient you bring in really SICK!

Annony you fucking asshole did you ever thinkn your comments are

made by the dumbest asshole ever to live? This is a great story dumbass, I gave it a 5 to offset your remarkable retarded comment

Not me but I know at least 5 personally with 10 plus inches. One being really fat around also . He fucks a lot but many never want it again because it hurts. If she really did enjoy it then hubby is in trouble. She will cheat forever so he should cut his losses now divorce the pig now

1*

talking about a retard. Folks meet bonny/vasty the whore of Literotica. She's hiding behind anonymous today, but you can't miss her biased whining about the anons. Another author polluting the loving wives category with the non-erotic willing cuckold tales.

nice

Good story and looks like Anna and Bob are becoming a item. Don't think Anna is going to be bothering with hubby anymore when she has orgasms like she does with Bob.

Sort of reminds me of dear annony's wife.

Once she enjoyed a real man with a real cock she didn't both with the asshole of LIT any more. 5 for a good read and the story of dear annony's life.

This marriage was toasted...

This marriage was toasted...soon they will find themselves divorced...And I don't think their neighbour will want to support her or even marry her...1*

5

STUPID ANNONY IS A FOOL AND IF HE HATES THE STORY IT MUST BE GREAT!!

1*

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

Finally, a LW story with hot sex. We don't get enough of this. Now, if we could get hot and erotic without it either being a scorched earth BTB story or a total cuck job. What about a real story?

Not another one...

More fetish, wife sharing, alternate lifestyle, gay crap...
Real men/husbands with "Loving Wives" don't share or allow themselves to be shared.
I thought this was Loving Wives not Slut Wives or Hot Wife category.

It's fiction

To all of you who predict what's going to happen to this couple next (and most of you predict divorce or some other awful outcome), IT'S JUST A STORY. IT'S FICTION. Since it is a creation of the writer, what will happen to this couple in the future, if they have a future, is totally in the mind of the writer.

I wish the owners/administrators of this site would create a separate category, too, so that those who want to write or read stories about lovey romantic stories about wives or revenge fantasies about cheating wives could have their own category without being mixed in with spouses who have sex with people they're not married to. I don't like to read the revenge stories and many of you don't like to read the sharing stories unless there's some retribution. Get used to it.

So why don't you guys who hate the sharing stories recognize in the first paragraph or two what the story is about so that you can save yourself aggravation and energy writing how awful it is???? Hmmm??

Hey Rocketeer50

Blast off!!! And I'm being nice.Fucktard. I could give a shit about sharing stories.Some are even pretty well done. Thus one was SO cliche it sucked.Oh yes 11" Right? Why not 18"? This was a poorly written mess.Sorry rocketman it was just not any good

Awesome!!!

That was an amazing story. Loved it. Love the way it looks like the beginning of a great cuckolding relationship that husband wants even when he's not sure.

Would love to see you continue this story. Maybe her choosing the neighbor more and more over hubby while hubby is present. Eventually with pregnancy risk, alpha male themes, and clean up duties. Very hot. Loved this.

To some it's more than fiction, Rocketeer50

For them, reading these stories, giving one star and dropping a comment predicting STDs for the characters and wishing death to the author is therapy. Read Twistedsickmind's 'The One Bomber' in the Humor and Satire section. It explains much.

It's important that authors provide an outlet for One Bombers' need to express their psychopathology publicly. Authors who do not permit ratings (looking at you, Swingerjoe) or comments are being most unfair.

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1 star for title

Hey Rocketeer50

sorry about that I was drunk, and secretly I am gay. I loved the story !

wow!

Very nice. Thanks. I could just imagine that it was my wife. I liked the slow build up.

whoops their goes Tim's relationship with his wife

Tim has to hunt her down and find her with the neighbor and just watch. Sorry Tim you just lost your wife. She will soon move in with him and you will have a lonely life with your hand while he gets to enjoy all the good parts of youtsoon to be x wife. She is not going to need Tim any more. She just as much said that when she took off to the neighbor without a word to him.
By the way big Dicks aren't everything. Know a lot of women who have been with big dicks but because the emotional support was not there.they left.

A Stroke Story

And a pretty good one.

5 stars

This is what all of us old guys spend our time doing. Fucking the stuffing out of gorgeous young wives who have wimpy husbands.

It's almost overwhelming I tell you! So much young married twat to screw, so little time.

5*

This is a fantastic story. It's what the 'Loving Wives' category is supposed to be about. I love all your stories...especially this one.

11"-18"-24"

Why not make it a 36" cock? lol You fucking guys crack me up. Old rocketeer and luedon are foaming at the mouth again. What's the matter assholes don't you believe that every opinion is just that, an opinion. Who the fuck cares. You two sound like the world is coming to an end because somebody makes a nasty comment on a porn site. Get a fucking life.

1*

This really sucked big time. How can anybody think this cuck shit is erotic?

5 Stars Annomy

Because I want a slut hotwife just like Anna.

Trite, moribund, nothing new here...

...OK, so wow, the 50 year old has a monster cock, is widowed, so no conflict....and cucky boy, gets hot over super hot wifey getting sexy in front of the neighbor and he throws them together as often as he can. There's an invitation if ever there was one. Hey, honey, go fuck Bob's donkey cock.....it'll be fun. Just what did he imagine would happen? Now she's a size queen and will soon move residence next door, leaving hubby high, dry and hard up.
I'd press you for a sequel, but what's the point? Like this story, it's already been done.....and in far better fashion than this example.

Incredible hot

I really like the story, because it builds slowly. Waiting on the next part :-):

Proofread, edit, or learn the rules of grammar.

In the second to last paragraph alone, there are four grammatical errors. That's what you, the author, leave your readers. Why should we care about this weak story if you don't care?

Great story

Loved it...and why are grammar/literature snobs critical on a site they visit to wack off. This isn't some literary journal, it's a fucking porn site. Get some self awareness you arrogant fucktards. It made me hard. 5 stars.

VERY Hot Story

This begs for a sequel and you write it all so well. What I like about this story is that everyone is happy for a different reason. Nobody is agonizing over what happened and getting a gun or a divorce. Love how Anna's exposure of herself, and discovery of Bob's much bigger cock, led to so much pleasure for Tim. Hopefully, the continuation would have Anna and Bob enjoying one another as often as possible, but strengthening Tim and Anna's love for each other.

Sequel please!

Just dont have the husband be ok with it openly and never have her admit it. Have her sneaking around etc, lying and cheating. Fuck the haters here dont listen to them its a great story.

It's a hot story but I think if I were Tim I would feel incredibly heartbroken and insecure. I would feel I would no longer be able to satisfy my wife like Bob . See what people don't relize is they think it's just sex but sex converges the heart too. You can't share something like this with someone and have hearts not affected . It would be safe to assume their marriage would soon be falling apart because tTim would no longer be the Anna's desire.

Incredibly hot

Another of the most erotic stories on this site.

Data, dammit

OK, the 11-inch "honker" (?!) did throw me off, but the rest of the story was well done. Data, readily available, says that less than 1% are over 8, so who knows what miniscule percentage is 11, or what medical issues would accompany such an anomaly. Much more believable with believable numbers - note she didn't have 76" KKKKK bra size, and if she had, it not only would have been unbelievable, it would have been a turn-off. Elevens are similar. Gave it a 5 to balance out the haters, but it was really a 4 imo.

Pretty nice

I liked the build up, but I think the conclusion(the actual fucking of Bob and Anna) felt a bit rushed from the reader's perspective, as we didn't really get to see much of it.
I'm hoping for a continuation where we get to observe more of those two "being naughty" with each other. I'd like it even more if we could see a recording of their first fucking while the husband was sleeping.
I don't know in what direction you'd want to take the story, or if this is meant to be sharing or cheating or cuckolding or what, but I can very much see an opportunity in taking things further, maybe the two of them starting to leave the husband out of their fun and focusing on each other more exclusively(could be done with a perspective switch or the husband stumbling on some recordings after having noticed them being less open about their activities or thinking they've been together less often).
I personally wouldn't mind an element of Anna being "trained" either, but that's by no means a necessity, even without that hint of sub/dom relationship it could work very well for me.
Hope to see more from you.

Sequel please!

Please give us a sequel, your story had me hard as a rock!

Excellent

Needs a sequel

Liked It

I liked the story, but the end felt too rushed. You had a good buildup but then you end things too abruptly. You've done this in some of your other stories too. It either needs a sequel or you should get to the actual sex sooner. But hot story either way.

It's like everything else in life

This story is like everything else you'll see in life. Some people will like it, some will hate it. Yes it is cliche about the size of the man's dick but usually it's a much younger man. If this story continued I don't see her leaving her husband for the neighbor. I could be wrong and it's up to the author to prove me wrong. As for the grammer mistakes I've seen some so bad as to make the story painful to read.

I loved it.

My wife was kind of shy herself, that is, until we put in a pool. By the third year she had gone from full body one piece suits, to full coverage bikinis then on to string bikinis to finally a whole collection of Wicked Weazel suits. They are very tiny and most are see thru. It wasn't an older neighbor she fucked, but their teenaged son. She lusted after him each time he mowed the yard without a shirt and loose basketball shorts, showing his cock swinging back and forth. I encouraged her to flirt with him and pushed her to do more. It didn't surprise me when I came home early and watched them fucking on one of the chaise loungers. It became a game where she would time it so that I could watch almost every time. The best was the time he had two of his friends with him. I watch three teen boys make my wife watertight. It was hot. I love my wife .

1*

in honor of that whore bonny/vasty

re: anonymous I loved it

"I love my wife". No you don't. Anybody that turns a wife into a whore doesn't love her. You're a sick fucker, like so many on this site.