I always liked this series, so glad to see you've brought it back
Moon always reminded me of a toned-down, slightly more restrained Angel, but just as sassy, almost as snarky, and with just as firm a grip on reality, and a strong sense of who she is and what she wants.
This series definitely goes a long way toward filling the aching Angie-void inside me, and as I recall, at some point Moonbeam and Cloud meet up with Tommy, and possibly Angel, as well, if I'm remembering right; I'm looking forward to that, believe me!
As always, you leave me thoroughly entertained and gagging for more, please be kind and rewind as quickly as possible. Five stars, I only wish it could be more.
As everything else you write this one is superb as well, the characters are so full of life, the situations realistic as they can be, and the love that outshines the sun. Moon & Cloud appear as a special and incredibly voluble couple so it comes as no surprise that the folk in the new town accepted them with ease, reminds me of Ron & Bree and their acceptance as a married couple. Mr. M and his sister are another example of a happy b/s couple, they found their joint happiness with the help of our protagonists and I hope to read more of them. Harry for one is a gifted photographer but like most great artists has a few strange quirks of his own, nothing Cloud or Gerrie can't keep in check.
Yet it also leaves me with mixed emotions regarding some specific encounters, most notably the attempted rape. I know that such thing happen and it's not an easy experience even for a reader but it somehow really upset me more than usual, probably due tot he fact that Mr. M took some convincing instead action immediately to disperse them. Or maybe the fact that Moon looks so young that my instincts treat her as specially precious cargo, have a few female friends of similar stature with similar problems so I probably relate a bit too much. Then again they did move out for the reason of their environment so I expect no repetitions.
As a whole it leaves unmistakable impression and only deepens my appetite for the rest of the chapters. I didn't read the original so I genuinely don't know what to expect in the future, but I hope to see good and funny things for our cute couple and their friends. And of course I couldn't give it anything less than a 5*, this time with voting!
by
Anonymous03/15/16
Again!
Read this before, really looking forward to reading it again it's that good.
by
Anonymous03/17/16
Read this Years Ago
Don't know if you originally wrote the story or just copied and pasted it? but Moonbeam story been around for years!! don't know if you added to it or its same as before because didn't care for it then & couldn't bring myself to read it all again
Annony-moron's comment that this was up years ago is OK if you agree fractions make plurals; it was September 2014. It was written by GrandTeton, which is pretty obvious from the first few words, which are kind of hard to miss. It was good then. It's better now that we know there's a grand story to follow.
So glad you brought Moon and Cloud out of hiding again!
Unlike a certain person who shall remain nameless but is married to me, I took the precaution of downloading and keeping the entire Moonbeam saga last time out, so I could have a secret little peruse every so often. Will has all the Angel tales still kept safe (stored on 5 different hard-drives, just in case...), as I know you'll never be releasing them again, but he was too dense to grab Moonbeam last time. What can I say? I love this story, I love how it weaves (eventually) with my other fave, I love how you write, and anyone who says humor and eroticism don't mix should be made to read this just to see how it's done.
I understand there will be changes to the story, so the chapters you release may not be what I've squirrelled away, but I shall adore them all the same, I'm absolutely sure of that. So get on with it, I can only wait so long before the suspense gets too much and I have to go and sabotage Will, so if you have any regard for his life and personal safety, please allow my request. No pressure, eh?
I am looking forward to reading the modifications and enhancements
to this updated series.
I must admit I find it humourous to read the comments posted by readers who did not take the time to read the author's forward. Their loss, our gain.
i remember a long while ago now i wanna read one of my all time favorite incest romance stories on here and then i go on here and it was suddenly gone and i was internally screaaaming Noooo louder than luke (in that scene you know). So super glad it is finally back can't wait til the rest is back.
English
I always liked this series, so glad to see you've brought it back
Moon always reminded me of a toned-down, slightly more restrained Angel, but just as sassy, almost as snarky, and with just as firm a grip on reality, and a strong sense of who she is and what she wants.
This series definitely goes a long way toward filling the aching Angie-void inside me, and as I recall, at some point Moonbeam and Cloud meet up with Tommy, and possibly Angel, as well, if I'm remembering right; I'm looking forward to that, believe me!
As always, you leave me thoroughly entertained and gagging for more, please be kind and rewind as quickly as possible. Five stars, I only wish it could be more.
Really great yet leaves me with mixed emotions
As everything else you write this one is superb as well, the characters are so full of life, the situations realistic as they can be, and the love that outshines the sun. Moon & Cloud appear as a special and incredibly voluble couple so it comes as no surprise that the folk in the new town accepted them with ease, reminds me of Ron & Bree and their acceptance as a married couple. Mr. M and his sister are another example of a happy b/s couple, they found their joint happiness with the help of our protagonists and I hope to read more of them. Harry for one is a gifted photographer but like most great artists has a few strange quirks of his own, nothing Cloud or Gerrie can't keep in check.
Yet it also leaves me with mixed emotions regarding some specific encounters, most notably the attempted rape. I know that such thing happen and it's not an easy experience even for a reader but it somehow really upset me more than usual, probably due tot he fact that Mr. M took some convincing instead action immediately to disperse them. Or maybe the fact that Moon looks so young that my instincts treat her as specially precious cargo, have a few female friends of similar stature with similar problems so I probably relate a bit too much. Then again they did move out for the reason of their environment so I expect no repetitions.
As a whole it leaves unmistakable impression and only deepens my appetite for the rest of the chapters. I didn't read the original so I genuinely don't know what to expect in the future, but I hope to see good and funny things for our cute couple and their friends. And of course I couldn't give it anything less than a 5*, this time with voting!
Again!
Read this before, really looking forward to reading it again it's that good.
Read this Years Ago
Don't know if you originally wrote the story or just copied and pasted it? but Moonbeam story been around for years!! don't know if you added to it or its same as before because didn't care for it then & couldn't bring myself to read it all again
Not sure he should welcome all comments
Annony-moron's comment that this was up years ago is OK if you agree fractions make plurals; it was September 2014. It was written by GrandTeton, which is pretty obvious from the first few words, which are kind of hard to miss. It was good then. It's better now that we know there's a grand story to follow.
So glad you brought Moon and Cloud out of hiding again!
Unlike a certain person who shall remain nameless but is married to me, I took the precaution of downloading and keeping the entire Moonbeam saga last time out, so I could have a secret little peruse every so often. Will has all the Angel tales still kept safe (stored on 5 different hard-drives, just in case...), as I know you'll never be releasing them again, but he was too dense to grab Moonbeam last time. What can I say? I love this story, I love how it weaves (eventually) with my other fave, I love how you write, and anyone who says humor and eroticism don't mix should be made to read this just to see how it's done.
I understand there will be changes to the story, so the chapters you release may not be what I've squirrelled away, but I shall adore them all the same, I'm absolutely sure of that. So get on with it, I can only wait so long before the suspense gets too much and I have to go and sabotage Will, so if you have any regard for his life and personal safety, please allow my request. No pressure, eh?
Oh, and 5 stars, love this story!
I am looking forward to reading the modifications and enhancements
to this updated series.
I must admit I find it humourous to read the comments posted by readers who did not take the time to read the author's forward. Their loss, our gain.
Finally back
i remember a long while ago now i wanna read one of my all time favorite incest romance stories on here and then i go on here and it was suddenly gone and i was internally screaaaming Noooo louder than luke (in that scene you know). So super glad it is finally back can't wait til the rest is back.
As always.
Excellent!
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