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our thin blood

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by Anonymous

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by Maria239402/29/04

tomato soup

with water only...what in intriguing line
well,your poetry is always intriguing to me, just love it!

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by Anonymous02/29/04

silence

you have already said everything

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by Anonymous02/29/04

but....

aren't many things worth repeating?

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by jthserra02/29/04

And the universe

in a drop of blood. Once again, wonderful phrasing... excellent poem.

jim : )

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